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sireensilver

4/? The Stirring Blade

Nov 18, 2007 17:16

Title: The Stirring Blade
Series: Naruto
Character/s: Tenten (pairings will be worked in later. Muuuuuch later.)
Summary: AU; Set in a kingdom where warrior clans serve an emperor across the twelve lands that make up the land, join Tenten as she tries to start a new life after her grave loss. She will find it even harder than she first thinks it to ( Read more... )

stirring blade, fic

Comments 7

voix_celeste November 19 2007, 03:19:15 UTC

I'm absolutely hooked! The concepts and plotline are fantastic, and I can't wait for more.

Anticipating your next update......

sireensilver November 19 2007, 21:43:52 UTC

It makes me really glad to hear you say so. <3 Thank you!

silvery_green November 20 2007, 09:20:18 UTC

WOW^^It's a very interesting plot, I love the story and your characterization of Tenten is very humanely^^ [s]*since Neji's not yet in the story, I was hoping for a SasuTen..but I think it's leaning more to SasuSaku oh...well^^*[/s]I'll be waiting for the pairings and the story progress a.k.a. please update...>.

sireensilver November 20 2007, 21:02:47 UTC

Aw, I'm sorry I can't cater to everyone's pairing preferances, but I'm glad you're still enjoying it. :) I'll try to update soon. Thanks for the comment!

shadowsinfire November 21 2007, 03:08:32 UTC

I likes it~ it feels like you've started the story moving now, and I like this chapter better than the last one. You've got a few tense-errors and bits of phrasing that seem a little odd, but over all it's really good.

sireensilver November 21 2007, 18:27:53 UTC

Oh, thanks. I'll try going over it again soon to catch the errors.

Glad you like it. ^^

heavengly January 2 2008, 02:37:05 UTC

omg. i absolutely love it so far!! =]] i want to see how u develop the relationship b/w Tenten and Gaara and the rivalry b/w Tenten and Temari. *_* Hm... When does Neji come in to the picture?