Comments | sionnain_fics: "hindsight" and "excels the quirks" [hard core logo and slings and arrows, respectively]

inathunderstorm in sionnain_fics

"hindsight" and "excels the quirks" [hard core logo and slings and arrows, respectively]

Feb 25, 2009 14:56

Title: hindsight
Author: sionnain
Fandom: Hard Core Logo
Pairing: Billy/Joe
Rating: Adult
Word Count: 300
Warnings: breathplay (not graphic).
AN: Thanks to inlovewithnight for the beta!

( hindsight )

ds_snippets, c6d, slings and arrows, joe/billy, fanfiction, geoffrey/darren, hard core logo

Comments 28

wihluta February 25 2009, 21:20:44 UTC

I really like these! The contrast of the pain in the first and the humor in the second works very well. :-)

It makes him look like an unholy cross between Gumby and Pinocchio. Maybe Darren will get eaten by a whale.
I can totally believe that this is what goes through Geoffrey's head. LOL

inathunderstorm February 25 2009, 21:21:43 UTC

Thank you! I was a little o_O at my abrupt genre-switch, but hey. ::giggles:: I'm glad it worked!!

And oh, YAY. I'm so glad that sounded in-character to you! Thank you so much!!!

inathunderstorm February 25 2009, 21:22:02 UTC

Also I would like to stare at your icon for a bit.

::stares::

wihluta February 25 2009, 21:30:47 UTC

Stare away! I frequently find myself doing exactly that too. LOL

It was made by snoopypez. :-)

tyrella_2008 February 25 2009, 22:08:53 UTC

There's something Joe likes about watching Billy's body heave violently beneath him, about being the thing that lets Billy breathe.

I like this one... Thanks so much for sharing!

inathunderstorm February 25 2009, 22:17:34 UTC

yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reading :)

luzula February 25 2009, 22:26:56 UTC

Gah, the last line in the first one is kind of frightening to me. Those two are so fucked up.

The second one is just delightful! Your Geoffrey POV is so good, and you gave me a very vivid image of Darren in my mind. His flirting technique is...well, very Darren. *g*

inathunderstorm February 25 2009, 22:31:35 UTC

Yeah, they are so...BOYS. YOU WILL END BADLY AND IT SADDENS ME. :O

And thank you! I was v. nervous, so I am glad that it worked out. ::wipes brow::

dugrival February 25 2009, 23:34:37 UTC

Ha! Okay, I'm going to have "amusing-yet-horrifying Gumby/Pinnochio/Whale scenario" stuck in my head now. That is a weirdly catchy phrase. *hums it* I'm going to cling to that, because I feel like I just got my ass kicked by the Joe and Billy one, OW. Oh, boys. So fucked up. Good stuff, these!

And meeeeeep, tag acknowledged! *rattles brain*

inathunderstorm February 26 2009, 02:08:19 UTC

Thank you!! Poor boys, they are so doooooooomed. And thank you, I was nervous about the S&A one so am glad it works!

Yay! And have fun, I hope the prompt is okay :D

brigantine February 26 2009, 00:19:46 UTC

Oh, Boys, so, so messed up. Kinda puts a different angle on the reasons Billy knew he needed to leave. Ow.

*snerkle* And then you give us Darren, so out there he doesn't even realize how out there he is, and it's weird and wtf? and kind of adorable. Terrifying paisley. *cracks up*

inathunderstorm February 26 2009, 02:09:10 UTC

I do quite love them in all their hurt/comfort fucked up glory. :)

Yay, I'm very glad you enjoyed them both! <333