Stand-Alone: Makka (Scarlet): Part 2

[sinsofwill]

Title: Makka (Scarlet)
Part: 2/3
Rating: Sanguine
Notes: Gratuitous angst, like the previous part. Surprise. I'd say more, but... that'd spoil my the fun. ^^
Disclaimers and SO MUCH THANKING are just about the same as the previous part. ^^

Comments

[missitar]

Gakuto characterization. At this moment, that is even better to me than smut--though you've provided both in this chapter, so really, do I have to choose?

Liked the character dynamics. Liked the sex, clearly, liked Gakuto's unique brand of denial, liked what little glimpse we got into Oshitari's head; this chapter really interested me, because it's the sort of thing that can be looked at from the outside as something frivolous and totally unattached (like the members of the Hyotei regular team would have you know these two), but can also be seen as . . . more important, really.

[sinsofwill]

*chuckle* Gakuto's unique brand of denial is interesting, mostly because, as Cryssie says: he's in denial because he actually does know what he wants, but can't afford to let himself be hurt that way. Which makes him... less of a wanker than Atobe, shall we say? I do have a thing for denial. ^^;

*laugh* And, well... the smut mattered to them. Both of them. ^_^ Which is what's most important, in the end.

*grin* Thank you so much, hon! ^_^

[katsu]

OMFG!!! Monnie! You killed me! I almost started to cry here. ^^;; I know I am stupid. ^^;

You OshiGaku is so sweet, bitter and sensual. It makes me feel dizzy and sooo good. I am glad they get love from you and that you write for them. *snugs* I can't wait to read part 3.

And yes, you do way too much research! XDD

[sinsofwill]

Eee! *laugh* My OshiGaku's a little different from my ToriShishi and my AtoJi, yeah--probably why I don't write them so often, because, well, it's HARD! *laugh*--but they do deserve lots of love. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, hon! *grin*

^^<--big dork

Thank you~! ^_^

[sinsofwill]

*laugh* ToriShishi is my equivalent, I'm afraid, of sweets--and I've got a massive sweet tooth. *laugh* Still, though, it's nice to write something else for a change *mutters* even if that 'change' is gratuitously angsty smut... *giggle* Oshitari and Atobe are pure sex--but Oshitari is sex without the overacting, which makes it even more... potent, somehow. ^_^

*grin* I've got SUCH a weakness for Kansai accents. I really, really do. *chuckle* They don't have it quite as much in Kanazawa, where I stay, but they still have a little, and it makes me wibbly. ^___^

*giggle* Thank you so much, hon! ^___^ Hope your finals go well!

[mushrooms]

...........................You have left me completely speechless. Not even an UWAAH this time.

You do realise you now have me BEGGING for the next part?

And damn, that's it, I'm never gonna be able to finish the OshiGaku in-the-beginning I had planned. It was something like this, a let's-have-a-one-night-stand thing... and you already wrote it so beautifully that there really isn't a point to doing mine. ^_^

Speechless my foot.

Therefore... UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!

[sinsofwill]

Ehehehehe. *grin*

And damn, that's it, I'm never gonna be able to finish the OshiGaku in-the-beginning I had planned.

*THWAPS YOU* Hey! *laugh* That's not fair! C'mon. *pleads* I never get to read any OshiGaku, and... and... pwease? *grin* There can never be too many OshiGaku one-night stands! *delighted*

*SNUG* Thank you, hon! ^_^

[shizukanahikari]

[wordless comment. because I really can't figure out what to say. except, oshitari is now the sexy PoT boy.]

[sinsofwill]

*grin* Wordless is good. Wordless is much appreciated. *snug* Thank you, hon!