Stand-Alone: Geshi (Solstice)

May 12, 2004 04:03

Title: Geshi (Solstice)
Rating: Lava
Pairing: ShishiTori, a touch of HiyoTori, too
Notes: Ootori thinks too much. And Shishido talks too much. But then, when stressed, I write spastic fic. ^^; Unbetaed, and unseen by anyone's eyes but mine. *hides*
For: zerotwofan, though I suppose this turned into a very bizarre and rather belated Mother's Day present ( Read more... )

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sapphynashi May 11 2004, 14:11:03 UTC
*squeals* They're just so friggin adorabibble! I love your Shishido. He makes me smile, for some reason. ^^ *wants to cling to his foot and gnaw on his ankle like a rabid fangirl but would undoubtably get kicked to the curb*

Feel the love~ XD

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sinsofwill May 13 2004, 11:36:24 UTC
*giggle* A comment calling Shishido and Ootori 'cute' is not entirely what I expected, but hey, I'm not going to complain. I guess they did have their sweet little moment at the end, after all! ^___^

*wink* Well, you'd get kicked to the curb... but then Ootori would make him feel horribly guilty for it. *grin*

Heee! *snug* Thanks, hon.

...dear God, your icon is making me laugh INSANELY. XD

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sharona1x2 May 11 2004, 14:34:19 UTC
Sometimes, a story hits really close to home. Sometimes, I can relate to a lot of what happens, in a very personal way. I've lived through what Ohtori did in this. My circumstances may have been different, but the feelings were the same. The end result was the same. All I really lacked was a Hiyoshi.

This one made me cry, in a good way. Ironically, while you missed Mother's Day, you nailed my Shishido's birthday. Isn't that funny?

I think this is complete. I feel very satisfied (although my inner ToriHiyo fangirl is jealous) with the outcome. I loved the way you portrayed Hiyoshi. I can totally see him doing that (thanks in part to Hoshi and Rue). I also think it'll take him some time to find someone else, because getting over Ohtori can't possibly be easy.

I have so much love for this story. Just about as much as I have for its author. Happy Mother's Day, indeed. ^____^

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sinsofwill May 13 2004, 11:33:18 UTC
Mummy! *snug* My goodness, that IS quite... well, a coincidence. o.O Then I'm happy that I decided on the happy ending, really; this way, you can relate to the happy ending and not go down the path of unhappy possibilities. ^^ You and your Shishido definitely deserve to be together forever.

You're right--it's complete, or at least as complete as it's getting. I do think it'll take poor Hiyoshi awhile to find someone else, poor guy; honestly, I have a very difficult time seeing him with any other guy but Ootori, and the thought of him being lonely in the end because he did the right thing... *flinch* *sniffle* I'd write it, but that's just too much ache and angst for poor Hiyoshi; he doesn't deserve that.

I've come to the conclusion that, perhaps, he cares too much and has just never known how to show it--especially after something like this, where showing that he cares means having to give up the very thing he cares for. ;_;

...okay, I'm done with the angsting. ^^; Luffle you so muchlies, mummy! ^^

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pieces May 11 2004, 15:34:24 UTC
Wonderful story. <33333 Like very very incredible and beautiful and fitting..and very in character and very sweet and very angsty, but in a good way.

Having a pretty song to listen to helped and made it even more beautiful..I do believe that Onitsuka Chihiro's 'Suna No Tate' has now been dubbed as my ToriShishi song. ^_^ I should look up the lyrics when I get a chance.

But yes. It was amazing, as usually. ♥

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sinsofwill May 13 2004, 11:28:14 UTC
Eeee! I may have to go see if I can find that song somewhere. I've never heard a song of hers that I haven't liked... <3 (I think the title means "shield of sand," if that helps.)

Angst, oh angst. *amused* In any case, I'm glad you thought it was in-character, and that the angst wasn't TOO bad--thank you, hon! ^^

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pieces May 13 2004, 11:39:18 UTC
:D If you'd like me to send it to you I'd be glad to. Ping me over at zukafujifanatic sometime today. I have a bunch of othere songs by her as well. <3

Really angst makes the world go around sometimes. <33333

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branchandroot May 11 2004, 17:32:30 UTC
Kyaaa, Hiyo-chan's so cute! *regains composure* In his very own, inimitable, fashion. And, in an odd way, this story is a happy sort-of-ending for him, too, after Mayotta.

He and Mari would be cute together. Wonder if she's interested in attending Waseda, too...

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sinsofwill May 12 2004, 21:52:25 UTC
He and Mari would will be adorable. Though she doesn't exist in this universe, sadly. ^^; (Poor Hiyo. Shishido and Ootori will just have to find him a boyfriend offstage.)

*grin* I'm glad you like what Hiyo's done, though. *purrpurr* And it's a wistful ending for him, perhaps. He deserves better, but we'll see, neh?

Thank you, hon! ^^

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kageroh May 11 2004, 17:39:01 UTC
Oh jesus. Okay. Breathing deep. It all makes so much sense--the way you describe it. Coincidental coincidences between what you write and what happens to be happening make me grin ear to ear in so many directions.

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sinsofwill May 12 2004, 21:42:19 UTC
Amusingly, this seems to be a fic that's corresponding with a lot of people's life experiences. Hopefully, in a good way. ^^

Thank you, hon! ^^

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