Fic: Into you like a train. (Used, NC-17, 9200 words)

[sinsense]

Into You Like a Train
Used -- Jepha/OFC -- 9200 words -- NC-17

algernon-mouse emailed a rough couple of paragraphs to me about Jepha getting pegged for the first time, and I wrote her back the first draft of this. She and secrethappiness liked it, so I decided to turn it into something longer. helluvalot did a first round beta, and secrethappiness brought it home. Any remaining mistakes are mine

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[sinsense]

Dude, lately all of my comments have been failcomments, it's fucked up. "LOL THIS WAS GREAT THX 4 WRITING IT" is pretty much what my brain provides on the first run-through, unfortunately.

I really like Jepha in interviews, because he's the most chilled-out little fucker on the planet, like... a total asshole, like many of the stoners I'm friends with, but in this hippie-dippy way where he's like, "I love everyone. Not you, because you're an asshole, but everyone else. Maybe you in the sense that you're part of everyone, but, y'know. Get out of my face, okay? :]"

(Whereas Quinn's just all "D: YOU BROKE MY PENCIL DIAF" and Bert's like "SCREEEEEEEEEEEEE OH HAY SRY I JUST STOLE YOUR UNDERWEAR BY ACCIDENT AND SHAT IN IT" and Dan's all over in the corner giggling and going "qworp qworp qworp ANAL.")

Anyway. I love a tight POV -- I'm writing a POV switching story and it is IMPOSSIBLE TO DO OMG -- and I love that you love them too. Basically I'm just all ♥♥&hearts and pretending I'm better at the English language than that.

But I'm not.

♥