Chapter 21

[sinners_tongue]

Chapter 21

Their arrangement proved to be a success; William returned from school each day, buzzing with the boisterous joy of youth straight to his favourite room of the house-Jack’s room. He’d throw the door open wide, his hand clutching a crinkled piece of parchment that contained the latest exercises in Latin torture from Master Pinch’s devious

Comments

[ditte3]

Wonderful chapter.I already left a comment at ff net,but I need to tell you how much I liked the part where Jack told William about how him and Liz first met.It made me laugh as well as the scene where he spoke the sentence of the gladiators just when Elizabeth entered.It's always a good day for me when I can read your story,so update soon please.:)

[ladyofthesilent]

Thanks for commenting here as well!

We're glad you like it so much; we're trying to keep it funny and entertaining, even though I can promise that there's a lot more angst to come in the upcoming chapter(s).

[ladyofthesilent]

Welcome to LJ :) - it's great to have you here!

Thanks for the feedback, it's always much appreciated. We have several more chapters finished, meaning we might be able to update a little more frequently in the weeks to come - so stay tuned!

[obfusc8er]

Add me to the chorus of people who loved the Latin gladiator line and Elizabeth's entrance. Great chapter!

I can promise that there's a lot more angst to come in the upcoming chapter(s).

Excellent. *g*

[ladyofthesilent]

Thanks ;)

We're always trying to get some humour into the story - after all, that's (among other things) what we love PotC for!

So glad you're looking forward to the angst - hopefully, you'll like the next chapter!