The Fifth Act, Chapter 23

[sinnatious]

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  Luckily, this chapter is a rather short one, so I was able to get it out on time.  No update this weekend, though - I'll be going down to the coast.  So next chapter will be next wednesday.

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[kaorismash]

ASKJHGJASKGLAKDHAJKSHGKAKJSHGKJL; ;_____; God, it's been ages since I've experienced the bipolar effect you are so genius at bringing about. I WAS SO HAPPY at the beginning with Kunsel's Zack impersonation, and then you just made me tear all up at Cloud and his internal angsting over his Zack. His memories of his zaaaack and their past shinra days and the quote oh gosh I actually teared up no joke akjhdg.

And of course, every reader probably got paranoid with the lack of Sephiroth and Cloud's lack of paranoia, so fitting that you'd try to give us a false sense of peace but we know you better than that /:).

And then things just got WORSE AND I REALLY WANTED TO CRY WHEN CLOUD STARTED PANICKING. kjahsg. His heart monitor, I love his heart monitor, but I just get all sad that anything medical related is just going to send him into a fit of panic. And then, you do the hope thing with the leather instead of metal, only to have things go to hell. AND THE MENTIONS OF HIS GLOVE AND THE SCARS AND THE MAKO ;_______;

CLOUD CALLING FOR ZAAAAACK. Oh. Oh. YOU SPOIL US I'LL GIVE YOU THAT. ♥

Maybe due to part of Zack's personality lingering, *___*

asjhfjkasgh ;____________________;

[kaorismash]

Angeal's always been a tricky character with me, and I don't like him at all right now. :E

[sinnatious]

XD Always picking a character you don't like! Momoshiro, and now poor old Angeal... I will try and change your mind. ;)

Yay for bipolarity! \o/ IT GOES BOTH WAYS, WITH YOUR EVIL INSPIRATION, YOU.

And ahaha, I am getting predictable you think? :D

[kaorismash]

I don't dislike him on a Momoshiro scale! How can I when he's Zack's mentor? It's just he's such a moralfag character--my friend's words, not mine :D--except when he isn't. It may be because I have yet to see enough of him in the game--I have a really blurry perception of his betrayal, see--but I feel you'll be running him through mountains of guilt enough to make me feel bad for him. :( That and Genesis is gonna be on his hide. :>

You changed my mind about Genesis, though! Isn't that enough? :P I used to :\ at him quite a bit.

LIKE I SAID, I'M A BALL OF FLUFF. :">

It's less predictability than it is an ingrained expectation for doom and gloom. Plot wise I'm chasing my tail, as much as I love timetravel fics, I am an utter failure with creativity regarding them. MAYBE YOU'LL DO THE CRUEL THING AND THROW HIM BACK, FORWARD AND OUT OF EXISTENCE. IDK. This is clearly not the linear type of time travel fic (or IS it), and cloud's such a walking paradox and I keep coming up short for endings. but that's why you're writing it, so I shall patiently wait. *_*

;_;

[kaorismash]

AND I ALWAYS FORGET THE THINGS I WANTED TO COMMENT ON.

THAT PEARLS LINE? TOTALLY MADE ME THINK OF MISS CLOUDY. GLORIOUS STUFF, THAT.

[sinnatious]

>:3

HOW CAN YOU NOT ALREADY ADORE GENESIS WHEN HE IS PRETTY MUCH JUST GACKT WITH MAGIC POWERS? *__* Still, pleased to have converted you. :3

Hopefully I can keep you guessing! ^_^ Though it's probably nowhere near as convoluted as you're imagining.

(LOL, 'patient'? /:))

[kaorismash]

ALSO I FORGOT BUT I SQUEED OVER AC!CLOTHES. HEEE. *_*