The Fifth Act, Chapter 21

Jan 06, 2010 21:33

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  Is it really a cease-fire if the other country is still plotting to bomb you behind your back?  Hmm.

As a heads up, update schedule may take a hit in the near future, social calendar is in a state of flux at the ( Read more... )

act v, final fantasy, time travel, longfic, fanfiction

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Oh wow... daemoninwhite January 6 2010, 12:24:53 UTC
This itches as much as the overt cliffhanger in the last chapter, but in a more understated way. It's not obvious, but it's like there's an itching under my skin. I want to know what happens next, and I want to know now.

Or, whenever you're ready. Rushed work is not always your best. : pointed look at the 5th HP book...:

Also, you have no idea how loudly I squealed when you said that you were Australian. I feel this shared nationality has added another layer to our writer-reviewer bond. Or, you know, whatever.

Also, you have really nice fans. Sweethearts, one and all~.

Also, I like the psychoanalysing in this chapter. It gives another perspective, and it tickles at me.

Finally, I totally haven't staked out this site since about 5 o'clock, and no one can prove that I have.

Haven't, that is.

:coughs:

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Re: Oh wow... sinnatious January 6 2010, 12:49:30 UTC
Aha, that explains why you are so prompt in replying to comments and entries! Same timezone ftw. :D

You guys are an amazing bunch of readers! <3 The threads on the last couple of chapters have been fantastic. *__*

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Looks devious searisme January 6 2010, 13:11:07 UTC
Why, thank you.

*joins in on the coughing*

Ah, that's comforting to hear - because I totally did not update this page every tenth minute.

Didn't, that is.

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Re: Oh wow... daemoninwhite January 6 2010, 21:49:41 UTC
Me t-! Wait, 5 o'clock... PM? I thought you mean 5AM. *nervous laughter*

-Liz(eth) XD

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Re: Oh wow... demon_vampirate January 6 2010, 22:48:34 UTC
XD Lizeth, you're the best.
(~LeolaTaylor)

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