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The Fifth Act, Chapter 15

Dec 16, 2009 21:02

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note: This chapter has a little bit of everything.

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act v, final fantasy, time travel, longfic, fanfiction

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firedraygon97 December 17 2009, 01:33:21 UTC

It's weird, but when you divide the chapter up into different POVs, it seems so much longer. :O I like it.

*flails* Angeal, you sly dog! My Spidey-senses did not go off at ALL during that PHS scene. *is a little ashamed* But I do love it when I'm blindsided by these new developments. :3 I wonder how Tseng's going to get ahold of Cloud's PHS (will Rude and Reno be involved? XD) and whether or not Cloud realizes that his snazzy phone is going to bring trouble. Delete your contact list!!

Angeal had that Second he’d adopted, and Genesis had Loveless. What did Sephiroth have?

Hahahaha, Loveless is now equivalent to a puppy. XP At first I read it like Sephiroth was being snarky when mentioning Genesis, but now it just makes me feel sorry for him, that he doesn't have a passion for something yet. Hopefully this thing with Cloud will work out!

Genesis as a crazy mother hen is hilarious. XD Great image. It's surprisingly in-character for him.

Sephiroth trying to befriend Cloud is going to be AWESOME. We almost never see this, it's usually the other way around!

Seph: *joins the Gold Chocobo Elite or whatever Cloud's fanclub is called* Now I'll figure out what conversation topics I can bring up...

So looking forward to Sunday's update~!!

Also, Kunsel is lovely~ I'm glad he clung on to Cloud, it makes the atmosphere so different compared to other time-travel fics, where Cloud is a loner until Zack has to drag him around everywhere. :D

sinnatious December 17 2009, 10:06:05 UTC

Lucky for you then that most chapters have at least one change of POV. :D

Gold Chocobo Elite! XD That's brilliant! This needs fic, seriously. Stop making me want to write side stories!

It's a relief to hear that in some small ways this is at least managing not to be exactly like all the other time travel stories. Probably helps that not too many of them have CC characters in them yet. :D

firedraygon97 December 18 2009, 00:25:07 UTC

Stop making me want to write side stories!

DOOO IIIIIT!! ♥ And Cloud can learn about it from Kunsel. :D I wonder who the founder would be? Haha.

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