Beloved, Epilogue

Apr 13, 2013 19:06


Title: Beloved

Rating: for violence, language, slash.

Summary: VII, post DoC. Genesis/Cloud, one-sided Tifa/Cloud. It all starts when Cloud tries to leave during the middle of a Loveless performance.

Author’s Note: This was quite late, apologies, RL has put me through quite a bit of a wringer the past couple of weeks and writing has been the ( Read more... )

final fantasy, beloved, longfic, fanfiction

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gardensgnome April 13 2013, 10:29:24 UTC
*grins evilly as Cloud promptly chucks up all over Genesis* Good thing they are still in need of baths.

“I have a mansion in Costa Del Sol then. We could go there for a while.” - THIS IS PERFECT!

Yay ending, you finished it CONGRATS! but also sadness ending. I've never particularly liked Genesis but I really do like yours. He compliments Cloud very well.

Good ending to a good story *nods*

Now enjoy a well earned break and hopefully rl will ease up on you as well.

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sinnatious April 14 2013, 03:34:01 UTC
Thank you for reading! And for all of your comments throughout. :)

LOL, writing fanfic is a break for me really, I wouldn't do it if I didn't love it. But I will enjoy being able to work on new projects without feeling guilty. :)

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aelathehuntress April 13 2013, 12:43:07 UTC
You did a lovely job with the epilogue and your Genesis is fantastic.

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sinnatious April 14 2013, 03:34:16 UTC
Thanks! :)

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sinnatious April 14 2013, 03:35:48 UTC
Heh heh, thank you! Very happy you liked it! :D

Next fic... I'll probably post a couple more of those long-neglected Xmas prompt fills relatively soon, after that, who knows!

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lenine2 April 13 2013, 18:16:58 UTC
Like gardensgnome, my first thought was - if Cloud barfs on Genesis that will certainly kill the mood.

The picture of Genesis hastily stapling his coat before appearing before Cloud's friends makes me love him even more.

I am sad about the church, and the pool and flowers, but have to agree with Cloud.

It was great fun reading this. Thank you for writing!

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sinnatious April 14 2013, 03:37:10 UTC
I like how everyone went straight to the barfing. XD

Thank you!

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killiara April 13 2013, 19:37:47 UTC
That was absolutely beautiful. Genesis as awkward-but-hiding-it was ADORABLE. And bless Cloud for recognising when he hit his people-limit.

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sinnatious April 14 2013, 03:38:45 UTC
Thank you! Cloud would know the people-limit thing quite well, I imagine. :)

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killiara April 14 2013, 03:43:21 UTC
I've got my own People-Limit, and bless the fact that most of my social circle can recognise when I hit it and know I don't mean any insult when I bolt from a gathering. It's... really nice to see that represented in fiction, you know?

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sinnatious April 14 2013, 03:46:08 UTC
I know the feeling too! It's awesome you've got friends who can respect it. :)

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