No, I'm Not Dead

Jun 01, 2009 23:49

I'm tired and my back hurts. The only "writing" I've been doing is thank you cards. Now I need to find a job...anyone need an editor/technical writer??? TT_TT
However I did manage to turn the bits I wrote in the last post into an actual poem. I'm not 100% happy with it though, but then I've never really "done" poetry before. I like to read and admire it, not really write it.

Fratricide

Surprise bubbled on his lips,
A splatter of betrayal across
Pristine silence.

A familiar facade
That caught him alone.
All that remains
Are flies.

Vespers~! I got your reply! I will help ya with getting those pics in a bit! ^_^

Now I am off to take a shower and put itch cream on my million mosquito bites....TT_TT

randomness

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