of tomorrows, 2/2

[augustfai]

Title: Of Tomorrows
Pairing(s): Sho/Nino, Ohno/Jun, implied Aiba/Jun
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~19,900
Summary: Sho's assignment for the month of August is simple enough: find Ninomiya Kazunari.
A/N: Part two of two.

Comments

[sunnydreams416]

I promised you a more coherent comment @ je_ficgames but work ate up my life and I totally forgot until you responded to that comment so here's my attempt ^^

I read it again and fell in love all over again. There's something that is quiet and understated about the whole thing that I love.

I love that it's Sho that doesn't have a clear goal, but Aiba does. I lol'd when Aiba was running after Matsujun and texting Sho at the same time and apologizing for not being able to text properly (in my opinion it's a talent to text and run and keep an eye on your target all at the same time). Ohno's suggestion to Sho to take pictures from a certain angle to make it look more shady was pure win. The contents of Nino's fridge reminds me of mine at the moment, lol. And these are just a few of the details that I love about this story.

I think that the details of the story don't detract from the overall storyline but instead enhance it is what I adore. It's what I like a lot about your fic *is embarrassed for revealing what a lurker I am!*

I still offer you my heart ^^;; this story completely stole it

[augustfai]

LOL, it's not a problem at all--I promised myself I would reply to these comments ages ago, but school ate up my life and I totally forgot until I came back to my fic journal and realized that....uh, I hadn't said thank you to anyone yet. XD So please excuse how late this reply is!

But thank you so much for reading and commenting. It really makes me happy to know that you enjoyed this fic so much, and cared enough to leave me such a great comment ♥ I love that you've picked out little details because those are my favorite too! More than writing the big picture, I have a lot of fun throwing in the little things, like Aiba running and texting (only he would be able to do that, and not even very well, lol), and how Nino only eats like 4 things, and Ohno's character--I had fun with him.

So again, thank you sososo much! Don't be embarrassed about being a lurker--I am definitely one myself.

♥ --> there's mine! We can do tradesies. :)

[sunnydreams416]

I am a sucker for details so I love that you throw little ones that make the big picture so much more.

♥ --> and there's mine! I look forward to reading more of your writing ;)