I had an awful day but reading this definitely brightened it up quite a lot. I really love your story and this chapter was so eventful and interesting. I like how the relationship between Willow and Gabriel is developing and the way you pictured Gabriel's attitude toward Cecilia makes me smile. And creepy zombies are creepy, I was very worried for Adrian and Jasmin and I wish Willow will find a way to get her book back soon! Also, Rownan... I just love him! :)
Aww, I'm sorry you were having an awful day. I'm really glad this little tale of zombie mayhem can pick things up a bit for you. XD But you know, I'm really happy that you're reading my story! That's awesome! Thank you so much for your comment. This brightened my day too. :)
ZOMBIE FUN TIMES CHAPTER! This was awesome! I love love love the way you built it from the tension in the first scene, slowly gearing up to the action, so well done, it had me on the edge of my seat right up until the end. Incidentally, I love the way you use slides without text just the right amount. I know I tend to over-narrate and have trouble letting a slide just speak for itself sometimes, so I'm always really impressed by how you put together your narrative visually
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Zombie fun times yay!!! I'm telling you, it was fun to throw in undead hordes to play around with. I'm happy you like Aria's role. I think she fit the part nicely. :D
I really do favour pictures over text for story telling, but that's because I don't feel quite so natural as a writer. We tell our stories the way they have to be told, and whether you're more comfortable with text or images, so be it. :) That's what I figure.
Jasmine is sooo fun to play and write. I love getting her to "shine" in moments like this. But it's not over yet.
More on Willow and Gabriel in the next chapter. Again, thank you for the comment!
Well I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love writing chapters like this, it's so fun. :) I agree, it's hard to see Cecilia and Jasmine's resemblance sometimes but it's definitely there. They have the same shape nose and eyes, just in different places. :p
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Great work with the chapter. Posing looked really good.
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I like how the relationship between Willow and Gabriel is developing and the way you pictured Gabriel's attitude toward Cecilia makes me smile.
And creepy zombies are creepy, I was very worried for Adrian and Jasmin and I wish Willow will find a way to get her book back soon!
Also, Rownan... I just love him! :)
And, on a side note, your new header is awesome!
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I really do favour pictures over text for story telling, but that's because I don't feel quite so natural as a writer. We tell our stories the way they have to be told, and whether you're more comfortable with text or images, so be it. :) That's what I figure.
Jasmine is sooo fun to play and write. I love getting her to "shine" in moments like this. But it's not over yet.
More on Willow and Gabriel in the next chapter. Again, thank you for the comment!
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