The Stallion
Here is my story! A little synopsis on my story: A man named Jack moves into a new house in the wilderness following a divorce. Unbeknownst to him, his new house is right by a grassland where wild horses roam. One day, he spots the most beautiful black horse he ever saw...............
Things I would like critiqued: I would like for you guys to post what you did like about the story and what you didn't like OK?
Here is the latest Chapter!!!
http://simsfan13576.livejournal.com/2886.html
New readers start here!!
http://simsfan13576.livejournal.com/920.html