D&J - Gratified Affair - 02/?

Apr 16, 2007 19:42

Gratified Affair
drake & josh. drake/mindy, josh/ofc. chapter two. 2933 words. general.

Summary: Their dislike for each other runs deep, but Mindy and Drake find the only way to get what they want is if they work together.

prologue / chap. 01
gratified affair - chap 02: yo-yos & sweet talkers )

fandom: drake & josh, series: (d&j) gratified affair

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sherpamelissa September 18 2007, 18:51:21 UTC
Dude? How am I the only comment on this chapter?

Forgot my yo-yo,” Drake replied innocently, holding up the sparkly blue toy for all to see. Mrs. Hafer found herself speechless, as often was the case in her least favorite student’s presence. Rubbing her temples, she decided it was best to press on.

So Drake! You really write them well.

He flicked his head to move the hair out of his eyes and he saw Mindy looking back at him like a cat that had finally caught her mouse.

Mmmmmmm, the hair flick. Yes.

In a flash, the boys were a tangle of limbs as Josh pounced on Drake and the two began to wrestle. Screaming, yelling, pinching, slapping - everything was fair game as Josh worked out his frustration and Drake just tried to shield his face from any damage before his own date that night. Their fighting would’ve continued on, but the two boys immediately stopped when they heard a shrill, piercing noise.

What? Oh? I was reading your fic? Sorry, I got lost in a daydream about two hot boys wrestling....

Josh said, grinning as he realized how far they had come since those early days. "But now...well, we've got each other's backs. Best friends, brothers; whatever you wanna call it, we're there for each other.”

So sweet!

Mindy paused and pushed a lock of brown hair behind her ear, hesitant in her answer. But she let the words fall out of her mouth as fast as she could.

“I’m here to see you.”

My heart jumped! The excitement. Yay! I love the beginning of relationships with all the flirting and sweatiness and pumping hearts.

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sherpamelissa September 18 2007, 18:52:02 UTC
Okay, I'm nuts. I couldn't see those other comments until I commented. Your inbox is going to hate me. *hides*

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mochacola September 19 2007, 17:48:09 UTC
my inbox LOVES you, no lie.

What? Oh? I was reading your fic? Sorry, I got lost in a daydream about two hot boys wrestling....
bwahaha, this had me laughing so hard. it's hard not to watch the show and see the, ahem, subtle undertones in the drake parker/josh nichols relationship *whistles*

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