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D&J - Gratified Affair - 01/?

Feb 27, 2007 13:41

Gratified Affair
drake & josh. drake/mindy, josh/ofc. chapter one. 2604 words. general.

Summary: Their dislike for each other runs deep, but Mindy and Drake find the only way to get what they want is if they work together.

prologue
( gratified affair - chap 01 - syrup & speed racer )

fandom: drake & josh, series: (d&j) gratified affair

Comments 5

marleybanana April 3 2007, 15:52:21 UTC

Oh, Drake and Mindy are so in love...preschool style! yay!

mochacola April 3 2007, 16:37:30 UTC

ahahaha, preschool style! soon, he'll be pulling at her braids or something ;)

"I just burned him! CAJUN STYLE!"

marleybanana April 3 2007, 17:22:35 UTC

oh, Eric...there are no words...

and now i need a craig/eric icon!

sherpamelissa September 18 2007, 18:41:22 UTC

First, I love how you weave this into an actual episode. Very cool. It really gives me a great visual on what is happening.

“Dude, I’m on a date,” Drake said pointedly. “I can’t just leave right in the middle of it.”

“I’m sure Sticky Fingers won’t notice,” Josh said sarcastically. “C’mon, Mindy only lives a couple of blocks away.”

“Excuse me, do I get a say in this?” Mindy interjected, watching the two brothers argue.

Awesome dialogue. You really captured all three of them so well.

“Oh yeah, that’s real rich coming from someone who doesn’t even have their license. What’s the matter, no driving academy at the loony bin?” Drake shot back as he stuck his hand in his frayed jeans pocket.

Oooh, Drake! Mean.

...her breath hitched in her throat as he took a curve a little too quickly for her liking. He heard her and shot a quick wicked grin her direction.

HOT!

If she really thought about it with the way that the last vestiges of the sun made his hair glow even more red than usual and the fact that he looked so relaxed just ( ... )

mochacola September 19 2007, 17:45:19 UTC

First, I love how you weave this into an actual episode. Very cool. It really gives me a great visual on what is happening.
thank you! i was inspired for this whole fic from the episode Eric Punches Drake and that somehow turned into weaving a lot of season 4 into this fic. It's fun to get details and stuff like that right, but kind of hard too.

i'm just loving that you're loving this so much. going back and reading your reviews has made me go over old chapters that i haven't read in awhile, which is nice so that i can make sure my timeline isn't all screwy or something *hugs*