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fic; return the favor

Jun 24, 2011 00:03

Title: Return the favor
Pairing: Shige/Ryo
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Due to extenuating circumstances out of his control, Shige ends up having to move in with Ryo.
Author’s Note: 6308 words. For ryogrande, who asked for it. ♥ This was just a random break from all of the exchange and challenge fic writing and because I greatly missed RyoShige. Idk, I had many ( Read more... )

p: ryo/shige, type: fanfiction, r: nc-17

Comments 33

starg8fan_liz June 24 2011, 10:11:41 UTC

so sweet LOL ^__^♥♥♥♥ looove the end XD

tatoeba June 26 2011, 21:05:29 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :3 ♥

je_sugoi_suki June 24 2011, 11:42:15 UTC

Ah~

I love Ryo in this fic soooooo much!

Thanks for sharing!

tatoeba June 26 2011, 21:05:56 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :3 ♥

akirawithtears June 24 2011, 11:54:31 UTC

Ryo so sweet XD

and I love shige like this ...

tatoeba June 26 2011, 21:06:44 UTC

Haha, Ryo's a total softie. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting!! :D I'm glad you liked it!

ryogrande June 24 2011, 14:10:37 UTC

YAY FIC FOR ME!!! i am loading this on my phone AS WE SPEAK and i promise you a detailed comment later. ♥ THANK YOU!!!

ryogrande June 25 2011, 22:40:50 UTC

GOOGLE CHROME JUST ATE MY EPIC COMMENT AND MY RAGE CANNOT BE CONTAINED IN MERE CAPS.

ugh, i'm so mad, i had such awesome things to say about this that i cannot recreate. but i guess i have to try. grumble.

so i started off taking quotes but in this instance it doesn't really convey my appreciation since most of what i love is in regards to the timing and writing style.

“I like my couch,” Ryo retorts. “I don’t need you denting it over the week.

“I’m glad to see you have such faith in me.”
“Don’t make me lose it,” Ryo adds with a smirk

now morphing into a completely different kind of pleasure, one that seems to burn slow and smooth like a candle just beneath his skin.

“Don’t stare like that, you creep.”

He pushes Ryo off him and says in a low voice he ddin’t know he possessed, “Undress.”basically i LOVE LOVE LOVE that you gave shige some balls and had him make the first move. somehow you manage to write them butting heads while still being equals, and as this is what i love the most about the ship, it's my favorite part of this ( ... )

tatoeba June 27 2011, 18:01:52 UTC

ALS;KDG;ALSDG RI. ;__; This comment, it is more than epic!! So it's okay that chrome ate your original comment. XD

a;lskdg I am SO glad you liked this, omg. You picked out a few of my favorite lines too which makes me happy. :D ALSO GIVING SHIGE BALLS. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HARD THAT WAS LOL. XD I wrote that first kiss scene like five times. XD a;lskdg Idek what else to say. ;_; Your comment made me really happy and I'm so, so glad you liked this!! ♥

XD Clearly we make a good team that way haha. XD Thank YOU for the fun prompting. :D I'm happy you enjoyed it. ♥♥♥♥♥ :D :D :D

hippoharry07 June 24 2011, 14:35:59 UTC

This was so sweet!

Loved it, thank you for sharing!

tatoeba June 27 2011, 18:02:09 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting! :3 ♥