Headlights on Dark Roads - Chapter 1 [AtS]

[remember_nomore]

Title: Headlights on Dark Roads
Chapter: 1/?
Author: Nora [remember_nomore/simply_shiny]
Pairing: Tara, Angel, Lindsey [smooshed together at some point]
Rating: PG [Currently]
Word Count: 1,643
Authors Note: I blame chlare for this 1000%. Then again this is just fun to blame on someone. Title from a Snow Patrol song - that’s quite fitting actually.

Comments

[strangecreature]

Ooooh, great start!!

Love the new and creepy connotations of Lindsey planning to 'get the girl'.

Aw, she works for Lorne! I love that set up. I could see her being a great barmaid until somebody got her flustered. And Lindsey, heaping on the Southern charm... and it totally not working. *snerk* Could just be me, but I like that you threw an edge of dark into the boy here. It suits with that season.

“If I had known I would have put some weight behind it.”

Bwahaha! I've mentioned that I adore your Angel, haven't I? *G*

Definitely looking forward to more of this! :-D

[remember_nomore]

TY honey. I love how Tara is just like 'uh, whatever, go away' instead of the usual. hehe. Tara isn't a barmaid, she has no idea how to make drinks and you'll see the utter cuteness in the next chapter. *laughs*

Now I wanna know what edge you're talking about, I think I have an idea but I wanna know. hehe.

*blush and shuffles feet* Daw! You're biased. But yes, I did love that line too much.
*dies of shock* You actually read something!! *snirk*

[strangecreature]

Hee! Can't wait.

It was this bit, especially:
“Ever hear of the customer is always right?” He let a playful smile cross his lips and he turned his blue eyes to hers. “I’m sure you’re due for a break,” he pressed, reaching out and touching her hand for a moment.

Even if he was as hot as Lindsey, I'd still be creeped right the hell out by a guy coming on that strong. It kind of shines through that he's on a mission there, and that lends it that dark sort of undertone. That's all! *g*

I may be biased, but I also love me some good L/A interaction. :-D
Dweebmeister! I read when I have time and a computer. Alas, lately I haven't had much of either.

[remember_nomore]

I have already wrote that part and I can't stop giggling.

That's what I thought you meant *beams* Yes, he's very preditorlike there. He's also a wanted man desperate to prove something.

Yes I know. There will be plenty of good and bad L/A interaction

That's me! *grin* I know you will. You need to get a laptop asap

[shinodabear]

Great opening. Love the setup of Tara working for Lorne and Lindsey out on a mission. And ah! I love Angel's entrance. *g* So adorable.

Looking forward to more.

[remember_nomore]

*beams* ty honey. I can't wait to write more myself, I have a few ideas planned for them. It should be very interesting.

Angel was always good making an entrance *G*

[novascotiasam]

What a treat to discover a new series coming from you! You know your Tara is The Best and that I adore your Lindsey/Angel vibe. After all, I still have your's and Meg's devils_thoughts saved!

[remember_nomore]

YAY! Glad you think that sweetness. I am actally nearly done with the second chapter right now, I need to get some finishing touches on it.

*blushes* I am glad you think so sweetness; I can't wait to see how this story turns out.

Don't worry, I haven't given up the other one I was working on with Tara, Lindsey, Wes and Lilah.

[raynedanser]

Good start hon. . .