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First Kisses (8/13) for asioleh "Commencement"

Oct 02, 2006 17:07

viii. Commencement

Prompt was: I'd like to see a kiss in their first meeting.
Given me by: asioleh

A/N: Actually this is a prequel to this drabble. Not that you have to read it to understand, just a matter of interest ( Read more... )

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elva_barr October 2 2006, 23:49:18 UTC

Oh, great-- You can tell how younger Wilson isn't as restricted. He's getting used to having more attention paid to him. It's great, and I love the detail of the lampost and the snow.

simple__man October 3 2006, 02:11:54 UTC

Nope, he's not starched and buttoned-down yet. I wonder if a youthful encounter with House wouldn't do that to ya.

Not often that I ever write anything descriptive, esp not descriptive enough for fanart, but damned if I wouldn't chew off my arm to see that. Y'know? It's gorgeous in my head.

elva_barr October 3 2006, 19:30:31 UTC

Hence why House loves to rumple Starchy Wilson, because he knows he's capable of being an witty, immature ass that he can be. (The little jerk that could?)

I might draw it, but it'll take me some time. I did draw Wilson, you probably saw that.

simple__man October 4 2006, 03:30:23 UTC

Exactly so. (The little jerk-off that could?)

I seem to remember. I won't beg. I'll just look cute.

See, this is me, looking cute.

Be amazed at my cuteness!!!!

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phoenixangel13 October 3 2006, 02:35:15 UTC

"kiss me it's beginning to snow!" i <3 things that remind me randomly of rent.... heh

but then again i love this anyway, so so adoreable, and house and wilson are so free, even though house is still like that, he's still restricted in a way only pain or hurt or time can bring. though the way my mind works i can't see how they would get from here to pretending it never happened, unless it was only a one night stand arrangement, and it makes me sad, other than that oh so lovely.

(and you're right, it would be gorgeous in fanart, i've seen an icon with the above rent quote and them standing in snow, but that's the closest it gets. i would offer to do it, but i'm terrible at getting things done and drawing from my head, heh.)

simple__man October 3 2006, 02:42:52 UTC

Well, House is House, and I imagine he said something extremely insensitive and crappy in order to crush the poor kid's feelings, after he'd gotten what he wanted. And the poor kid, not being the starched version of Wilson we know and love, probably took it to heart, and it really broke him up.

No problem! I can't even imagine getting fanart for a story of mine, my description is so crap, but it's a good scene. It's such a good scene, I know I stole it from somewhere, bc usually I don't see things that clearly in my head. Conversations, I hear, but scenes? Not so much.

phoenixangel13 October 3 2006, 03:12:43 UTC

ah you do have a point there (oh look at that... just noticed bigger font, lol, random), house would pull something like that in the right (wrong) situation. he just had to kick the puppy...

haha, oh i have the opposite problem, i can see images perfectly (but can't get them out the right way, gr), but conversations, made up ones anyway, i can't get very easily.

simple__man October 3 2006, 03:16:00 UTC

elva_barr was bitchin about the font ^^

I know, it's sad, but it's House. He just can't be happy.

I wish I could. I look at my writing and go "Wow. Not a single description. Nothing about the room, what they're wearing. Go to hell, Nicky, you suck." Then I get over it. But I wish my brain worked just a little bit more descriptively.

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asioleh October 4 2006, 00:31:48 UTC

HEy, I`d like to thank you for using my prompt. Nice story.

simple__man October 4 2006, 03:51:51 UTC

No problem at all, thanks for giving it! Glad you liked.