On the Brink, Part 2 by simonesimone

[simonesimone]

"Nonsense words?"

"Yeah, I only let a couple of real words through..."

"Atlantis.  War and Peace."  John smiled.  "It's funny, because I didn't even recognize the nonsense words...they just kind of made the other stuff stand out more..."

"I was afraid that would happen.  Your brain would rationalize the surreal aspects...that was another reason I

Comments

[beadattitude]

Oh, this is splendid, and I love how you make everything not quite happily ever after and make the boys work for it. Lovely!

And the sex was combustibly hot. ::puts out a few small fires around the room::

[simonesimone]

Thank you! I wanted to leave it not totally happy and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[oportunemoments]

Congrats, I think you're the first person to convince me to like McShep

^_^

[simonesimone]

Haha, dude how did you find your way here if you don't?

[skeddy_kat]

I really enjoyed the story. I loved the Trebtians with their common sense and their waterpark! You did a good job of developing a relationship between John and Rodney. (I like that so much more than the "from casual friends to instant sex with no middle" kind of story.) Thank you for sharing it with us.

[simonesimone]

Thank you. I agree with you about that. I wanted to err on the side of too much development rather than not enough--I've always felt it makes for a more satisfying conclusion.

[stormheller]

Wow. That was great. I really enjoyed that.
Thanks for sharing.
~ Stormy

[kalikahuntress]

This is awesome, I can't wait to reread this:)