If "windows in time" was the prompt, then yes (I didn't realize you were writing for a prompt!). :) I like the way you flesh out the metaphor, especially using freeze tag. I was just trying to remember all the rules of freeze tag, in fact. :)
Ok- it wasn't clear from the entry that you meant it to be for Idol. I'd definitely add that in somewhere (either in the title or at the top or bottom of the entry), because it could definitely be taken for a stand-alone non-Idol entry. :) But yes, I think it works quite well for the Idol prompt, too! <3
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Thanks for reading. It really means a lot to me that people read.
I hope you make it back to the game. Are you all healed and well now?
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Well, hopefully it fits somewhat.
I'm glad the idea of freeze tag made you smile.
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