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Malrennan's Fall - 11

May 06, 2010 14:43

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emily_i_am May 6 2010, 15:07:14 UTC

Yay for an update! I adore this story and always get excited to see another part. The imagery you combine with an interesting storyline is just fantastic, I am in awe that it always gets better! Can't wait to see where they are headed next, that last line has got me bouncing on my seat! Well done!

esperesa May 8 2010, 16:40:18 UTC

Thank you so much :D! Ah, that next location... I'd better get to building those mountain lots. Egh.

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esperesa May 8 2010, 16:53:56 UTC

I enjoy his smug gob myself too. XD And you're right, there's definitely more to everyone and their apparent loyalties than shown.

starling_1 May 6 2010, 15:41:54 UTC

Wow fantastic! Absolutely drop dead gorgeous imagery and yeah, agree, everyone seems to be doublecrossing everyone else!!

esperesa May 8 2010, 20:42:55 UTC

Whee, thank you! I wasn't so happy with how the hotel room turned out, to be honest, but it served its purpose I suppose.

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esperesa May 8 2010, 21:50:29 UTC

I find him interesting to write, too - lots of layers to peel off. I've big plans for the next site. Big enough not to feature it in only one chapter, anyhow. XD

phoenixfg May 6 2010, 19:00:53 UTC

WOOT!!! New update! Fabulous! I loved the first bit of imagery. Just how long did he stay in the asylum as a kid? Was he immediately adopted? What? What? WHAT?

I love the fact that you keep us coming back for more. And your images are just to die for!

esperesa May 8 2010, 21:53:02 UTC

I imagined he was born in the actual cell, but in retrospect that wouldn't seem very realistic, perhaps. His origins will definitely come up though.
And that's a lovely compliment. Thanks, Phoenix! :D