Silviano Displeased With Winonan Headlines
As I was browsing through the Winonan, WSU's weekly newspaper, I realized that one thing that need work is their headlines. In this week's issue, the headlines "Usher's latest album doesn't meet Steph's expectations" and "Corrigan indulges 'sunshine and puppies' side, sees new Miley movie" are used for each author's respective article.
Clearly, we know who wrote the piece since there is a lovely spot for their name under the headline, before the article, that they are just making themselves seem redundant. Of course, their article will have their opinion of the music, or movie, that we don't really need a precursor to what they think.
For Steph's article, if the music selection interests the audience enough for 'us' to read, than we will read it and find out for ourselves that she felt let down by the album. She could have used something like "'Raymond v Raymond' comes up short," or "'Raymond v Raymond': Usher just needs to give it up already."
And as for Corrigan's work, it's clear she went to see Miley's new movie because she's writing about it. Although, personally, I think that her credibility should go down for paying money to see a Miley movie...enough said. Thanks.
Clearly, we know who wrote the piece since there is a lovely spot for their name under the headline, before the article, that they are just making themselves seem redundant. Of course, their article will have their opinion of the music, or movie, that we don't really need a precursor to what they think.
For Steph's article, if the music selection interests the audience enough for 'us' to read, than we will read it and find out for ourselves that she felt let down by the album. She could have used something like "'Raymond v Raymond' comes up short," or "'Raymond v Raymond': Usher just needs to give it up already."
And as for Corrigan's work, it's clear she went to see Miley's new movie because she's writing about it. Although, personally, I think that her credibility should go down for paying money to see a Miley movie...enough said. Thanks.