Forgot to post this here..

[silvestris]

This fic is the result of a round robin-type collaboration between me and silver-ruby. In fact, it started with a collaboration-picture. Which in turn was inspired by a stray comment on another picture here in my LJ. X3

Comments

[eerian_sadow]

oh that was great! aside from that yummy dose of 411 smut, i loved getting to finally see vexen turning the tables on marluxia. it was most enjoyable.

[silvestris]

It was all just a matter of time. Silly Marluxia, not realizing what a risky game he's playing when he really believes himself to be better than Vexen at anything and everything. He's in for a bunch of surprises. XD

[hokuton_punch]

... hgkmdfakl;dsklds. *mind melts out of ears*

Hohglkdmfalkdsm. I mean - just - a;ldkjaf;lkdsj!!! SO HOT IT HAS REDUCED ME TO UTTER INCOHERENCY.

[silvestris]

Oh dear! *scoops up go and hands to you in tupperware-jar*

Thank you..? XDXD
Glad you liked it. ♥

[silvestris]

I'm very glad you liked it! :D
And well, dialogue/interplay is almost necessary with these two, or at least a major part of what makes them so much fun in the first place. There just has to be snark and powerplay. X3

And Vexen is lovely on top, he is. If I didn't like breaking him into tiny pieces even more, I'd write him like that a lot more often. XD

[triedunture]

Whoa. Wait. Ok. Lemme find my brain...

First of all, fantastic. Very incredibly smooth for a round robin. And the power struggle of the plot lent itself well to that device. Good show.

Second, holy moley that was sexy. There were times where I was flinching (ice on balls = sympathy pains) and then I realized I SHOULD be. Really puts someone in the room, you know?

The length was impressive, how you kept the ball in the air for so long. Just...I have too many good things to say. Bravo.

[silvestris]

XD

I'm glad you like it! While our styles are somewhat different, it did flow together pretty smoothly in the end. :)

*snigger* I'm sure both their lengths are impressive... :B
Hrm. Anyway. Thank you very much for all your kind words! I'm really happpy you liked it. :D

[tipsybluetips]

Excuse me, but I need to say that - I love you. Marry me. Have my deranged, leather-clad babies.

Vexen not only is one calculating, analytical, UTTER bastard, but he manages to literally fuck Marluxia to the ground at it. It's beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
His stilettos aren't helping me with my case of fangirling, too.

About Marluxia... well, It's Marluxia. Trying to be his usual arrogant self until he just... can't. Nothing like seeing a proud man crumble to make a girl's evening ^^~

And, ice!play. OMG, ice!play. And Marluxia thought Vexen couldn't pull kinky with a natural ability like that up his sleeve, the naïve virgin XDDDDD

Both the artwork - mad, MAAAAAD envy of your skills - and the ficcage are absolutely addicting. Thank you so much for existing.

[silvestris]

This comment had me laughing for several days. I can't stand babies, but the vision of leatherclad giggling little deranged chibis of doom... was very entertaining. XD

Vexen is all about the calculating and analytical, whether making replicas or finding out what particular nerve-endings make Marluxia writhe and moan the most. u.u

"Nothing like seeing a proud man crumble to make a girl's evening"

It's beautiful when that happens, isn't it? I think you just summarized why I like both these men so much. Vexen at first, because he's forced to submit humiliatingly even in the game, pride prettily in tiny pieces around his feet. And then when you realize Marluxia is just as much fun to break, you have two very entertaining toys to play with. XD

I do believe Vexen is a natural at kinky, even though he may not realize it himself. He'll just apply his usual "the more knowledge the better" mentality on sex as any other subject and make sure he learns, because that is what Vexen does. And poor Marluxia just stands there staring as Vexen