The O.C. Fic: The Worst Chrismukkah Ever (2/4)

Feb 17, 2005 17:20

Title: The Worst Chrismukkah Ever
Fandom: The O.C.
Rating / Genre: PG-13+ / Gen / Chrismukkah (2)
Words: 2788
Spoilers: Season One & Two
Disclaimer: The O.C. is property of Fox.
Schmoopy Dedication: For emonerdgirl in response to the challenge she issued. In November. Whoops. Happy Chrismukkah!New Year!Birthday?!. Sorry it took so long and fret ye not, the ( Read more... )

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cheekymice February 17 2005, 11:58:50 UTC
Thanks Silverweave, I needed that...dare I say it ..I think I have read too much smut today and I need to get some angst going for my next chapter!

"Sure I am," Seth rebuffed him casually, "I'm gangly, Jewish, I read comic books, I've got a guitar I can't play, a surfboard I don’t use and I talk to a plastic horse." I loved that line, sums Seth up wonderfuly!

On another note, I have made mel promise NOT to use the dreaded 2nd photo!

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silverweave February 18 2005, 04:38:11 UTC
I'm glad I could help. So pleased that you picked up the, "Sure I am," Seth rebuffed him casually, "I'm gangly, Jewish, I read comic books, I've got a guitar I can't play, a surfboard I don’t use and I talk to a plastic horse." I love that line too!

I hear you're photoshopping. Can you make me thin?

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cheekymice February 18 2005, 04:44:32 UTC
Ain't nothing wrong with you girl, you have va-va-voom...Speaking as a stick insect I would love some of that!!..Sadly there was nothing I could do with making me look less like a drunken dick!! :0)..but I did even out our skin tones a bit!

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silverweave February 18 2005, 06:27:20 UTC
Va-va-voom, the new name for boobies! But thank you; and you're not bad lollipop skinny, you're just slight. With fab hair.

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elzed February 17 2005, 13:46:04 UTC
Lovely stuff, S. Lovely. Full of little shout outs that made me smile (bits of dialogue and such). Loved the opening up, and Seth actually doing less pitching, mroe catching (and NOT in a slash way, ladies); and the jumpsuit, and the little naked moment too (yes, I noticed!), and Captain Oats.

V.V. nice indeed.

And I hope you didn't pick up the crap fluey cold from the babe. She's better, but it's been a slog (I actually left work and rushed to the GP y'day. Not serious, it turns out, but she was not well).

aargh Photo 1 only, please! Hideous gnome in pic 3!

Also, the word books, perhaps, is missing after the word subversive

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silverweave February 18 2005, 04:49:07 UTC
Thanks for the post-beta, ou know I'm a bit slack on that stuff sometimes. And the word up and another one somewhere which I've also corrected. This is what happens when you write at 1:00am!

I feel it's my duty to clean you up with a bit of fluffy, non hurt-comfort angst (colds don't count, I was instructed). Seth be a bit of git, but he doesn't mean to be (most of the time). He accepted Ryan right away and mroe than anyone I suspect he makes Ryan feel normal. I just wanted to acknowledge that.

On the beurgh note, I feel better than yesterday and still came into work. Might knock off a bit early though. And I haven't sneezed and snorted, so I think on reflection that student is probably the culprit. Glad the babe is doing better!

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helen_c February 17 2005, 23:04:36 UTC
This Normally, Ryan would have run a mile to help Julie Cooper plan a Water Polo Team Appreciation Society Ball rather than sit down and have a Cosby-talk about anything with anyone. had me giggling for a good 5 minutes. :D

I loved the angst, and the Ryan opening up - I'd always wanted to see one of the Cohens ask Ryan about what he had told them on Chrismukkah.

Great fic!

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silverweave February 18 2005, 04:52:37 UTC
I'd always wanted to see one of the Cohens ask Ryan about what he had told them on Chrismukkah.

Me too! It was good that Kirsten and Seth mentioned it, but I was none-plussed by her answer. "Here darling, have a platitude!"

More angst to come, but a bit also a huge mashmallowy dollop of Chrismukkah fluff!

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