The Window: Chapter 15 (part 2)...

[silvershiner]

Title: The Window
By: Silvershine

Pairing: KakaSaku
Rating: M/R/NC-17
Warnings:  Greasy chopsticks...

He was there, sitting at the ramen bar, guzzling noodles so fast it was hard to imagine how he didn’t choke. Hinata froze on the spot, biting her lip. What to say? She so badly wanted to be like one of the other girls - like Sakura - who could walk over

Comments

[scorpionocean]

OHH SNAP.

[bjfactory]

Okay, so everyone reacted accordingly. Awesome writing, btw!

takes a deep breath

I need to calm down before I start bashing characters I don't hate (some I like very very much) in the manga but really really dislike right now at this moment...

Oh, btw, FANTASTIC buildup to current dilemma. Can't wait to read the next part!

[demeter918]

HOOOOOOLY JEBEZUS.

That was the absolute best way to just break open the pandemonium. I've been thinking about the different ways that their relationship could be revealed, but a crowded street with almost everyone listening in... that's awesome. No longer a rumour, just hard fact and... I'm really looking forward to the next chapter now.

[anonymous]

I'd like to say that you're the first person i've come across who has written genma being serious in a situation like this - i feel that he's not as big of a perv as everyone makes him out to be in their stories. Also, despite the fact that you have me horribly struck dumb with wanting to know what happens next, i have to admit that i really, really hate sakura for being so selfish (despite having half-heartingly trying to not be) and my heart completely goes out to naruto. definitely looking forward to what developes later between them (and possibly sasuke's reaction just because that's like a cherry on top of this mess).

[bjfactory]

Umm... is confused... what did Sakura do that was so selfish?

...

Isn't Kakashi the one squeezing her thigh?

[girldisturbed13]

All Sakura cared about at that point was reveling in the feel of his body pressing down over hers and the feel of his hard length stroking deeply inside her. It didn’t matter that her pleasure was out of reach and forgotten. Knowing that it was her body that made him muffle his groans against her neck and had his hips surging harder against hers was a mental pleasure that couldn’t be topped.

...exactly which part of this portrayed too much selfishness? *rolls eyes* precisely why i don't accept anonymous posts in my journal.

kay, enough random nonsense! i'd just like to say that silvershiner You. are simply. amazing. Your kakasaku stories's always blow me away! Thank God I finally found someone who loves this pairing as much as I do. *worshipshugsglomps* I friended ypu to keep track. Hope you don't mind and gawd! I can't wait for the next chapter! 8D

[avierra]

Hmmm

[fdandaland]

I submited a review in FF.net but I have to say it again .. the BEST chapter ever!
Perfect writing!