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The Window: Chapter 11...

May 13, 2007 15:01

Title: The Window
By: Silvershine

Pairing: KakaSaku
Rating: M/R/NC-17
Warnings: May contain pips.

Window

Chapter Eleven

Sakura sat outside her mother’s house long before she dared knock on the door. It was cold, her arms were prickled with gooseflesh, and every now and then a drop of water landed on her knee as the sky threatened to spill over as it had ( Read more... )

Comments 23

zaila May 13 2007, 16:17:47 UTC

Omg wow. This chapter was out so fast! *guh*...You little tease! But at least we're getting somewhere now. XD You are made of awesome.

talking Ino on summer days "with Ino"
Where being a kunoichi just was a romantic daydream "kunoichi was just"
Her feet felt like leaden blocks, and she could hurry her pace "couldn't"
question of whether Sakura would be there when he got had been plaguing "when he got back"

maureenosaurus May 13 2007, 16:23:11 UTC

...sorry i just had to say this: i LOVE your display picture....it makes my life.

zaila May 13 2007, 18:50:44 UTC

Lol I like that icon too. I really wish I could say I made it though. XD

silvershiner May 13 2007, 17:14:03 UTC

Fixed, thanks! :3

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maureenosaurus May 13 2007, 16:22:10 UTC

...i've officially decide that you are very, very cruel. gah. ending that chapter there...gahhh.

i'm going to try and wait patiently for the next, obviously, amazing chapter that is to come.

you rock, seriously. good job. ^_^

Fanart kuramasbluegurl May 13 2007, 18:25:57 UTC

Hey, a friend and I are doing a collaboration for you, it's of the first chapter of this story. She drew the line art and I'm painting it. It's a thank you for writing such great fanfiction!!!!
when it's done should I post the link here or email to you?

water_faerie May 13 2007, 18:33:10 UTC

Hooray! I will read this before I go to work :)

Review bjfactory May 13 2007, 18:43:46 UTC

Hey, thought I'd actually give a real review instead of my ff.net's "been here, read it, great!" types ( ... )

Re: Review jade_sabre_301 May 13 2007, 18:57:25 UTC

I just want to second this review as saying everything I want to say, except much better. I love the piano lesson part of this chapter because it shows that, while this fic mostly centers on Sakura and Kakashi's relationship, there's more going on in each person's lives than their sexual tension, and they're able to delegate at least some of their attention to those other things. It's refreshingly realistic.

And really hot. XD

Jade