Fanfic: Heartbeat (Shuuhei/Kira)

[silverharmony]

My other fics on this pairing: Pieces | Breathing With Him, In Time | Etched | Utterly Spoiled | All Along | Sense of Normalcy | Feverish Burning | Divide | 12 Drabbles | Stepping Stone

The reason I'm posting this fic is because I've been horrendously busy and I don't know when I'll have time to write fics again - it could be a very long time, for

Comments

[antha_aryn]

OMG HARMONY YOU KILLED KIRA AND MADE ME CRY I'M NEVER TALKING TO YOU EVER AGAIN!!!!!!!, is totally what I would say if I didn't love you so damn much.

Uhm. I don't know where to start with this one except that if you had to look for the word Perfect and Beautiful in the dictionary you'd find this piece right next to it!

UWAH I'm so sorry I cannot find the words that will do this piece justice, it is so heartbreakingly beautiful and makes me want to cry like a little girl!!!!!

Thank you so much for sharing!!!!! You are a goddess!!!!!!

[antha_aryn]

And I think it is awesome that I had absolutely no intention of checking any of the comms tonight because I'm practically dead on my feet but there was this nagging feeling on the back of my mind telling me to check them ASAP and hahaha YEY! 8D

[silverharmony]

Asdfkghj;la and ILU so damn much, too. Thanks so much for giving me your feedback ♥ Technically it's hard for me to write about deaths too, so I'm sorry to put you through that XD *sheepish*

And yay for the psychic brainwaves! 8D We're channeling each other through our ShuuKiraness.

[heukya]

...I don't know what to say. I really thought Kira and Hisagi were seeking only each other for help but to think all that was just illusion.. And when they are together, you've said just right amount and left the right stuff unsaid. Your vocabs are phrases flow beautifully...!

[silverharmony]

Thank you so much! Even though I don't consider this my best effort, you still flatter me :)

I love playing with weird things like hallucinations and illusions. Even though I didn't have much time to write this fic, I still had fun with it; unexpected twists at the end are always worth it. So if you didn't realize that it was all just an illusion in the beginning, I'm glad, because that signals a success!

I appreciate you coming by to give me your feedback, thank you!

[xxlanaxx]

Wow that was totally beautiful...i can think of no other words to describe this right now

[silverharmony]

Thank you so much! For someone who's as insecure as me when it comes to my own writing, I consider that a huge compliment. Hopefully the fic was enjoyable for you. :)

[xxlanaxx]

it was! it totally was!

[assassin_nariel]

dkljfdncdkncaemfkjfkjkajfknfanfewaaaaaaaaaa... *cries*
Compared to this, my MostEvilFicOfTehFakeFandom is pure Fluff.
You BITCH.
I bow before you, you evil... evil... *goes to cry*

[silverharmony]

>:D That's the first time someone's referred to me as an ebil bitch through my fic. Should I take it as a compliment? Haha.

Thanks so much for coming by and reading - and sorry for making you cry XD I really hope you enjoyed it. *Petses*

[assassin_nariel]

That's the first time someone's referred to me as an ebil bitch through my fic. Should I take it as a compliment?

Definitely compliment! To create an emotional response so strong is, by default, a sign of accomplishment, and, btw, you rock.
Did I enjoy it - well. Right up to the point the horrible ebbilness and meanity and T_T... was revealed. And after I stop sobbing my heart out, i can admit that this is a fucking, FUCKING brilliant piece.