This is so terribly sweet! And I like the pacing - very nice and slow and intoxicating (XD).
I thought the tenses were a bit confusing (erm, is it past or present tense or something else?), though I felt that if the bit before the ending was in past tense and the ending in present tense, then the ending doesn't really feel that abrupt (to me, at least) - since the past tense bit would then be describing a specific event and present tense bit equals what always happens! It kinda feels really romantic, imo. (If that's the case, that is. Correct me if I'm wrong?)
In other words, I am so in love with the last sentence of the fic.
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This is so terribly sweet! And I like the pacing - very nice and slow and intoxicating (XD).
I thought the tenses were a bit confusing (erm, is it past or present tense or something else?), though I felt that if the bit before the ending was in past tense and the ending in present tense, then the ending doesn't really feel that abrupt (to me, at least) - since the past tense bit would then be describing a specific event and present tense bit equals what always happens! It kinda feels really romantic, imo. (If that's the case, that is. Correct me if I'm wrong?)
In other words, I am so in love with the last sentence of the fic.
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This was romantic~ (besides the hotto smexx scene *AHEM* XD)
Liked it *thumbs up*
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