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[silver_lion23]

This is my first attempt at posting a fic, or actually a drabble. I'm rather simplistic, and so is my writing if you don't mind it. Lol. In any case, this idea popped in my head a few nights ago when I was re-reading my Viewfinder books. My eyes settled on the frame when Asami was cutting Fei's hand... the blood and his smile.

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[afterburn]

*tears well up in eyes*
N-noooo! Asami you broke him! Fix him, Asami! Fix him now!!

asdfghjkl for a first timer, that was really well done. Hopefully you'll write more in the future and I look forward to reading them. hopefully they won't be this sad??

[silver_lion23]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. =)

[pugsley]

That was very nice and you did a great job, especially on your first drabble!!

This was a good reflection of what could happen in their relationship, but luckily I think that Akihito has more spunk and goodness and especially rebellion for Asami to really ever "break" him that violently, or at least lets hope he does!! *pets aki's head*

Thank you for sharing this with us and I hope that you will share more fics with us in the future!! (o';'o)

[silver_lion23]

Hopefully he does stay on the right path, and I do love his rebellious nature. I wouldn't want him to change... all that much. I guess this take on their relationship stemmed from wanting to see Akihito take some control in his life. It makes you wonder just what Asami went through to be the way he is.

[pugsley]

I also, want to see Akihito take some control in his life, especially in the aspect of his life that has to do with his Asami!! He also needs to start being honest with himself; in who and what he is and how Asami fits into his life!!

Akihito has a great attitude and certainly does not take crap from many people, but he does have a tendency to let Asami take over a lot of things that he once had control of.

It makes you wonder just what Asami went through to be the way he is.
~ I have often wondered this myself!! A few writers have delved into that subject, and I loved all of the different views. But I wish that Yamane-sensei would tell us more about him and what guided him in his past to make him the strong, determined, slightly vicious and gorgeous man that he is today!! She is really the only one that knows what motivated her to make Asami how he is, but perhaps that is something you might think of writing about, since you are curious about it, like I am!! *throw out plot bunnies* *runs*

[silver_lion23]

He also needs to start being honest with himself; in who and what he is and how Asami fits into his life!!
~He's starting to think about it. If you looked at ch.11, there's something from the both of them, and it's making me anxious... anticipation and all that. lol.

But I wish that Yamane-sensei would tell us more about him and what guided him in his past to make him the strong, determined, slightly vicious and gorgeous man that he is today!!
~Yes! We're like Akihito. We don't know Asami at all, and we want to know more.

but perhaps that is something you might think of writing about, since you are curious about it, like I am!! *throw out plot bunnies*
~Maybe. hehe...

[nightygal]

Omg...that was a sad story!! (*sobs and blows on tissue*)

I love the senti, emo stuff in this fic!
You should do more of these! You've got what it takes! Lol

[miershyk]

omg~ *dabs tears* it's sad, but the type that hits you in the face so hard that you can't cry...

somehow this looks like a deeper insight into Asami that he does not want to admit... i mean, we all know Asami as the type who could careless about other people... but to think that our innocent Akihito has changed... *sniff* Asami might have felt content now that Akihito has become his, but the 'new' Akihito... *waaaaaaaa*

[elwen_rhiannon]

... and that's how Asami made a new Feilong.

Terribly ironic, in a way.

Yet somehow I would like to see it in the series...