White Collar Fic: Shackled

[silver_falcon24]

Title:Shackled
Rating: R,

Word Count: 5000~
Fandom: White Collar
Characters: Neal, Clinton Jones, Diana Berrigan, Peter Burke
Disclaimer: Any recogniseable characters ot situations belong to Jeff Eastin
Summary: Taken from this prompt at collar_corner; an undercover job goes wrong and Neal finds himself handcuffed to a radiator in a burning building. Oh

Comments

[rabidchild]

This was great - tense and exciting, and yay Jones! I like how you've switched POVs as well - just a wonderful story. I'm such a sucker for h/c.

[silver_falcon24]

Thankyou, glad you liked it! There needs to be MOAR JONES.
And yeah, I'm a sucker for it myself. Thanks for reading <3

[micheleeeex]

i loved this!

[silver_falcon24]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it <3

[gaelicspirit]

Wonderful! Very nicely lived up to the challenge you selected. I would definitely be up for more.

[silver_falcon24]

Thankyou! I'm glad it worked! I was worried for a while. Thankyou for reading, as we'll see where the bunnies take us, shall we?
xxxx

[writerjc]

I like this a lot - love the h/c, the Peter, Diana and Jones worry, the minute details - very nice! :)

[silver_falcon24]

You gotta love h/c! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and my endless love of details, haha. Thanks for reading. xxx

[tj_teejay]

This was excellent, and written beautifully. I love the way you use metaphors. And the Neal!Angst and Jones!Angst is perfect and right on the mark. I think there's plenty of comfort in there as well, so don't worry.

Btw, I spotted two HTML italics tags in there, you might wanna fix those.

[silver_falcon24]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I does like me some metaphors, and the angst. I'm super happy it seemed to work. :D
Thanks for reading xxxxx

(oh thankyou, i'll change those, cheers.xxx)