The Red Boots 11/11

Dec 30, 2010 18:50

Title: The Red Boots
Rating: R
Warning: Swearing, violence
Fandom: Mint Royale AU
Disclaimer: Nothing recogniseable belongs to me.
AC: Thankyou to everyone who's read this and reviewed this, means a lot to me. I hope you've enjoyed this as much as I've enjoyed writing this. xxxx Now if you'll excuse me,  I'm going to PEACHES tonight.

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gurkboll December 30 2010, 12:28:02 UTC
AAAH I almost thought for a second you'd get them both caught! But asdfgh this was so good and I liked how Nick took time to notice all the details about Art, like his hair, eyeliner. And I love kisses like THAT. Omg so excited for the sequel!! Let it never end *____*

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silver_falcon24 December 31 2010, 17:27:44 UTC
Haha! No! I couldn't get them both sent down - then who would break them out???? ;) Gratuitous sequel has a PLOT as well, you know! and more porn
Oh Nicky, he's got it BAD, and still doesn't know quite HOW bad yet. It'll be fun when he does. XD
HAHA, YES! I have a thing for kisses like that too. bit was purely self indulgent. I have a definite flair for the dramatics, haha XD.
I'll be working on the sequel as often as i can!
I'm super glad you liked it! Now I know I'm not alone when i write my boys, because i love them. So much more than i probably should.
Thank you very much for reading <3 Your reviews meant a lot to me. I hope you have a wonderful New Year.
J xxxxx

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500daysofbummer December 31 2010, 06:58:50 UTC
february 1st CANNOT come soon enough. omg. omg. i continue to be completely blown away with every chapter and every detail. i felt so so anxious during the chase, and ohhh art being so loyal, and that KISS, yes so perfect! one of the best ever tbc endings. this is just...how are you not a super famous writer doing these kinds of novels/movie scripts? or ARE you and i just don't know it? ;) i wish i owned a publishing company or something so i could pay you (and a lot of other wonderful writers from BSH)) lots of money and make this stuff huge. sorry for going on and on everytime i comment but i just can't help it. thank you SOOOO SOOOO much for writing this, i will be very very anxious for your next installment. <3

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silver_falcon24 December 31 2010, 17:35:28 UTC
Oh darling, your reviews meant so much to me over the course of this. I worked so hard on it for so long, and it flopped so hard, but you really seemed to like it, and you told me what you liked, which for a writer is better than gold. Helps to know what you're doing right and whats wrong and what in between. It's helpful as fuck. So dont apologise for long and rambling. Long reviews make me feel squishy and popular, too. hahaha. <3

I'm so glad you liked the details, because that's one thing i love, i love details, i love intricate plot, i love interesting characters i can toy with, chases and dramatic kissing. XD This whole thing has been an exercise in self indulgence, i just realised, hahaha XD
Oh honey, you praise too highly! dont stop. I want to be a published writer, so hard. So hard. So you saying that means a lot to me. Once this fanfic is done I'm going back to the drawing board with this whole thing and making something i can throw at any publisher who'll stand still long enough for me to aim, so one day! Fingers crossed ( ... )

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500daysofbummer January 3 2011, 03:06:05 UTC
i'm sad that you believe it "flopped"..i don't know where everybody is, people have absolutely no clue what they are missing. i'm in love with stockholm syndrome and this should be as revered as that is!! (actually i could definetly see you and deepdarkwaters collaborating, you both write so beautifully) maybe people will catch on to it a bit late?? if there is anything i could do to help spread the word about this please let me know. i really appreciate that YOU take the time to respond to comments, and i sincerely cannot say thank you enough for writing and sharing this. i feel exactly the same in everything you listed that you like in a story. i think it SHOULD be self-indulgent-it's your story and your characters so you should be doing it exactly how you want! if i ever tried to write anything for this community i would be throwing in all the things i love :) you're welcome, you really deserve to be a published writer. i can only dream that i would be able to write anything somewhat NEAR the level of your writing. it's writing ( ... )

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pitpony13 December 31 2010, 16:02:44 UTC
Wow! That was one of the best chase scenes I've ever read! I was really worried that both of them were going to get caught!

Yay sequel! I'll be anxiously waiting!

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silver_falcon24 December 31 2010, 17:37:57 UTC
Awesome! I do love me a good chase scene! Screw just the movies having them! Haha <3
But rest easy! I'd never let the both of them get caught! Who would break them both out of jail then? Ok, logically i could find someone, but this is better!
Thank you for reading and reviewing, it's meant a lot to me over the last few weeks. I hope you have a wonderful New Year.
J xxxx

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unbelievable2 January 1 2011, 11:19:01 UTC
Life being what it is, I've been trying to save this up to read all as one story, but found I was sneaking in for little bits here and there - and now I really can read the lot! This has left me absolutely breathless. Fantastic pacing, great characters. I'll be reading agsin now, much more slowly!
:)

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silver_falcon24 January 1 2011, 14:49:00 UTC
Oh sneaky sneaky! I'm glad you found your way back! I'm soso glad you enjoy it. As long as people are, I'll keep writing. I'm super happy you've enjoyed it. The characters seemed to have control over themselves nearly from the start, so I owe someone somewhere something for them! I'm really happy you like them. And the pacing - I'm glad it worked!

Thank you for your review, and I hope you enjoy reading it again. <3
Have a wonderful new year.
J xxx

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bookends999 January 3 2011, 04:46:37 UTC
Really really really really really amazing!!!! :D and the end - aaaaahhhhhhh. I loved this story and the writing was great. And the sex - yum :)

oh and you so got me with this last chapter. Eagerly awaiting the sequel.

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silver_falcon24 January 6 2011, 21:12:39 UTC
Thankyou! I'm glad you liked it.

Haha, the fact i 'got' you makes me feel like a marksman, XD awesome. Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoy the sequel when it pops up. <3

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