Concrit for Me?

[silver_dice]

Hi! So, as I'm new to this whole RP thing, I'd appreciate any feedback you could give on how I'm going...

Think I'm posting too much?

Posting too little?

Treading dangerously close to something I really shouldn't?

Here's just the place to tell me about it!

Please avoid abhorrent flaming. It's hardly constructive. ^_^