Comments | silkblind: gundam 00, AU

ephemery in silkblind

gundam 00, AU

Jan 20, 2009 23:55

Bleh. First time writing AU. It was...interesting.

Series: Gundam 00
Pairing/Characters: Tieria/Setsuna
Prompt: in bandages and naked, highschool AU [pairing was part of prompt]
Summary: Setsuna of the past-present and Tieria of the future together. A medic's office, the dressing of wounds. A parallel.

( As if he wanted to attach or bind or restrict. Neither of them are skilled at subtleties beyond the instinctive. )

pairing: tieria/setsuna, series: gundam 00, character: setsuna, character: tieria

Comments 4

carameltrap January 20 2009, 14:28:22 UTC

This is really sad. I get an ache in my heart when I read this. You did really well.

ephemery January 22 2009, 15:16:22 UTC

Thank you.

zweikirschen January 20 2009, 23:13:51 UTC

The end was just, yes. I love that sort of bitter-sweet ending. In earlier paragraphs though it was sometimes difficult to identify who was doing/thinking what. Overall I like the way you build up that certain quiet dense atmosphere ♥

ephemery January 22 2009, 15:17:25 UTC

Ahh, I was wondering if that was going to be a problem. Maybe I'll go fix it up. Sometime. I am glad you liked it ♥