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I Try To Keep It Clean, But Honesty Is Wearing Thin.

Feb 18, 2009 20:32

Title: I Try To Keep It Clean, But Honesty Is Wearing Thin.
Author: silhouettes_die
Rating: NC-17/R
Pairing: UrieValdez
POV: Shane
Summary: The first time Shane meets Brendon Urie, he swears it could be the weirdest moment he’s ever faced
Disclaimer: I’m sorry if you sneeze, after all this is bullshit.
Warnings: Language, boy kissing, and some age difference ( Read more... )

bden/shane, urievaldez, shane valdez, brendon urie, fic

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tangy_original9 February 19 2009, 23:29:07 UTC

Hello. This story officially owns my life. When I finish my Scarlet Letter project I will let you know how much I flailed at this story.

Beautiful. Simply Beautiful. AND FLOUNDER OMG.

MORE WHEN I RETURN

silhouettes_die February 20 2009, 00:32:29 UTC

Thank you! :D Lol, yay I can't wait!

Aw, thank you again! Everyone seems to love Brendon being called Flounder XD. It is a true fact, Brendon is adorable & flaily exactly like Flounder :D.

*waits for you to return*

tangy_original9 July 22 2009, 17:18:58 UTC

........=0........

*Kind of hates self...a lot.*

WOW SO I COMPLETELY FORGOT TO RETURN. THAT MAKES ME AN AWFUL PERSON AND I AM SO SO SORRY. I should write you an apology letter because you might have just been sat here waiting for months and I never returned and I am an awful awful person.

OK SO I BASICALLY AM IN LOVE WITH EVERY ASPECT OF THIS STORY! Baby!Brendon cooking and making teenaged!Shane try his brownies and even if they might be gross he's so fierce, even back then, Shane just canNOT resist. Besides the fact that Brendon was in that adorable little apron and making cute little flirty comments without even realizing it. And omg he's only 11 so back away from this pedo situation right about now.

THEN WHEN HE IS OLD AND EVEN MORE ADORABLE...NOT SURE THAT IS POSSIBLE THO. Hiding in a tower of Disney stuffed animals and singing?! Do you know how much I was squealing at that?!??!? It was just about the cutest thing I ever read. Especially when he convinced Shane to get in it with him and the whole, "Shane you found my glasses ( ... )

tangy_original9 July 22 2009, 17:19:08 UTC

And slamming so doors and Spencer chasing after Ryan and Ryan getting really upset and crying and Brendon running outside and making a call to Shane sobbing and Shane always coming each time it happens, it happens a lot too!, and staying with him until the two make up.) So er...I forgot to throw in how much I loved the fact that Ryan did that because so realistic. Then he barely recognizes Brendon-people change! And then Brendon immediately knows from the name and he freaks out and is climbing on tables to get to him and the security is big and cuddly...like Zach! And tells him he'll be tied down and uhm, Brendon might like that kthanks! HAhahaha ( ... )

tangy_original9 July 22 2009, 17:26:23 UTC

OMG I AM SO SORRY MY MESSAGE IS SO SO LONG! And that I basically just re-told the story...haha. Uhm. *Shifts*. I still love it. A lot. *Goes to re-read*

silhouettes_die July 23 2009, 03:33:42 UTC

You have no idea how wide I am smiling right now! Your comment has put the biggest smile on my face and I don't think it is ever going to leave! :D

I think that this has to be one of the greatest comments I have ever gotten and it makes me even happier that it was for one of my favorite stories!

Also its fine that you finished your comment late! Life gets can get so busy you forget some things, and this comment totally made up for it in the end! :D

Also you cannot blame Shane for thinking bb!Brendon is adorable, even though it kinda is pedo, I don't think anyone can resist Brendon even at 11. He knows how to use his adoarble face. :)

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