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This is a poem i wrote long ago, it is one of my favorites although i let few ppl actually read this one, i have decided to post it in part due to the poem craze with Micheal and David, i wish to get fedback on it although when you post do not try to protect my feelings, i want all thoughts not just good ones or those in favor. Just make sure that if you do/dont like it then tell me why.
RELIZED
There once was a man who
had a gun
He brought it to his head
for some fun
He pulled the trigger, people
started to shout
"Ohh my god he blew his
brains out!!"
But what they dont know is
the freedom he feels
Never have to wait to start
to heal
Now he is in a burning place
called Hell
He was laughing so fully as
he yelled
Then he tripped and finally
found his sight
Then said "dear my" , "this is better
then my old life"
Then he comes back to Earth to
see what had changed
But nothing was different
why even children still sang
He looked around and saw that
no one had cared
The only mention of him was
to children to scare
Right then he relized his
pain wasnt shared
His life full of people who
pretended to care
When he sat in his room alone
just to cry
Everyone saw and knew but just the same
passed him by
Now he wakes up from his
hellish dream
Then goes to get the
items he will need
Knives, Guns, and clips of bullets
for his plan
Thinking how good it will feel
to ram
His gun down every f**kers
throat
Just like before in his poems
he wrote
Running, next day through school with
bullets to share
Wondering and thinking how he
will fare
On his quest to kill all his fellow
human beings
Cause he knows this was
forseen
For humans have destroyed themseleves
threw the years
Afraid of the devil but
yet so near
Killing each other, raping young
helpless kids
This is why people have
hid
For they are criminals in the
Laws Of Moral
Looking away from their
creation of horror
There is proof of this species that
is all hate
They are called the
Chapter Black Tapes
For they show all that
we've done
Killing and wasting away under
the sun
Whoever watches will turn against
their own kind
Searching and wondering jow
to find
A solution to humans and
our fall
Why i have it, kill
them all
Thats how i justify all
this screaming and pain
Why you have done it yourseleves
to all those you have shamed
As you laugh at them wildly
and pointing
They are in their heads wishing death,
thats what they are hoping
So now we get what
we deserve
Its been waiting for you
since birth
For we all are destined
for wrong
Thats the meaning of your
life all along
For what we do will
never change
Even though the faithful kneel
and pray
But faith itself has never
come threw
Why, as my gun is in your mouth
where is it for you?
Im suppose to believe a book
man wrote?
Thats the moment
I gave up hope
For we all decieve and we
all have lied
Thats how our lives
go by
So why is it so hard to
live today?
Why thats what our peers
have to say
For it is not your parents
who raised you
Thats was what our friends
had to do
Why do you think that
teens rebel?
Cause we have our own
mind, decisions, and hell
For in our head within
our brain
Everyone of us is a
little insane
Some people will show it to
the people
That is when they see
the reaper
You wont to do good, but
always fail
Always hear the saying "later you will
sail"
Why i am just like you, locked
in place
Thinking for nothing all gone
to waste
Cause when I open my mouth
"shut up" is what they say
But all i can do
is obey
But not anymore
while my head rolls on the floor
The blood splattered on the walls
frozen in frame
While my family looks
down in shame
For i started this story
with a scream and a cry
But when you finish i
hope you to sigh
Scream it out load
how I was right
Living my live
for this fight
If you dont agree, I
dont care
But eventually we will
be dust in the air
Cause its proven that this planet
cant hold on for long
hen the human race
will be gone
Later in time we'll all be
dead and extinct
Why thats what some
of us think
It wont be thousands of years
into the future ether
Why sooner before later
the day will be here
Now you know why I dont
wont to live for tomorrow
For this is my thoughts
and my sorrow
Ruin our lives is all that we've
done
This is a promblem humans
cant run from
BANG!! You hear the gun
threw the door
You heard my screams, but i
wont trouble you nevermore.......
RELIZED
There once was a man who
had a gun
He brought it to his head
for some fun
He pulled the trigger, people
started to shout
"Ohh my god he blew his
brains out!!"
But what they dont know is
the freedom he feels
Never have to wait to start
to heal
Now he is in a burning place
called Hell
He was laughing so fully as
he yelled
Then he tripped and finally
found his sight
Then said "dear my" , "this is better
then my old life"
Then he comes back to Earth to
see what had changed
But nothing was different
why even children still sang
He looked around and saw that
no one had cared
The only mention of him was
to children to scare
Right then he relized his
pain wasnt shared
His life full of people who
pretended to care
When he sat in his room alone
just to cry
Everyone saw and knew but just the same
passed him by
Now he wakes up from his
hellish dream
Then goes to get the
items he will need
Knives, Guns, and clips of bullets
for his plan
Thinking how good it will feel
to ram
His gun down every f**kers
throat
Just like before in his poems
he wrote
Running, next day through school with
bullets to share
Wondering and thinking how he
will fare
On his quest to kill all his fellow
human beings
Cause he knows this was
forseen
For humans have destroyed themseleves
threw the years
Afraid of the devil but
yet so near
Killing each other, raping young
helpless kids
This is why people have
hid
For they are criminals in the
Laws Of Moral
Looking away from their
creation of horror
There is proof of this species that
is all hate
They are called the
Chapter Black Tapes
For they show all that
we've done
Killing and wasting away under
the sun
Whoever watches will turn against
their own kind
Searching and wondering jow
to find
A solution to humans and
our fall
Why i have it, kill
them all
Thats how i justify all
this screaming and pain
Why you have done it yourseleves
to all those you have shamed
As you laugh at them wildly
and pointing
They are in their heads wishing death,
thats what they are hoping
So now we get what
we deserve
Its been waiting for you
since birth
For we all are destined
for wrong
Thats the meaning of your
life all along
For what we do will
never change
Even though the faithful kneel
and pray
But faith itself has never
come threw
Why, as my gun is in your mouth
where is it for you?
Im suppose to believe a book
man wrote?
Thats the moment
I gave up hope
For we all decieve and we
all have lied
Thats how our lives
go by
So why is it so hard to
live today?
Why thats what our peers
have to say
For it is not your parents
who raised you
Thats was what our friends
had to do
Why do you think that
teens rebel?
Cause we have our own
mind, decisions, and hell
For in our head within
our brain
Everyone of us is a
little insane
Some people will show it to
the people
That is when they see
the reaper
You wont to do good, but
always fail
Always hear the saying "later you will
sail"
Why i am just like you, locked
in place
Thinking for nothing all gone
to waste
Cause when I open my mouth
"shut up" is what they say
But all i can do
is obey
But not anymore
while my head rolls on the floor
The blood splattered on the walls
frozen in frame
While my family looks
down in shame
For i started this story
with a scream and a cry
But when you finish i
hope you to sigh
Scream it out load
how I was right
Living my live
for this fight
If you dont agree, I
dont care
But eventually we will
be dust in the air
Cause its proven that this planet
cant hold on for long
hen the human race
will be gone
Later in time we'll all be
dead and extinct
Why thats what some
of us think
It wont be thousands of years
into the future ether
Why sooner before later
the day will be here
Now you know why I dont
wont to live for tomorrow
For this is my thoughts
and my sorrow
Ruin our lives is all that we've
done
This is a promblem humans
cant run from
BANG!! You hear the gun
threw the door
You heard my screams, but i
wont trouble you nevermore.......