28 days later...

Apr 20, 2009 15:44

Zombie Comment Fic!!!

So, sylum_river_tam and I were discussing zombie dreams, and I was like, we should have a zombie comment fic thing. And she was like, it should run for 28 days! And thus, I am making this post, lol.

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  • Post a comment with a prompt (fandom, pairing, prompt word/phrase/scenario) - it can be anything your little heart ( Read more... )

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It's not Alright, SGA, Lorne, Ronon kristories May 1 2009, 21:53:38 UTC
He always wanted to be a sniper, Lorne's never met a gun he didn't like, sort of like a real classy lady, or Ronon. Don't ask, there was the thing, with the thing, where there were like fifty different copies of everyone but all the Ronon's were kind of the same.

The thing was, lying on his belly high up on the edge of the jumper bay opening and waiting for one of the reanimated corpses to shamble by on the pier isn't exactly how he was hoping to get his merit badge.

They had stumbled across it on another world, there had been a warning of a plague on a gigantic stone placed in front of the wormhole. Weir had made the assembled team, not John's or Lorne's team for once, gear up in hazmat suits before sending them through.

Hazmat suits didn't stop on of their team mates from getting partially eaten. Hadn't stopped the dead man from rising and shuffling his way through the city, biting people and eating people, spreading the infection. Zombie's, real life, undead, creatures of the damned, zombies.

They only move slow when there's no potential food involved. The lower levels aren't safe anymore and have been quarantined off for weeks now. It's just a matter of waiting for them to come out of hiding. Looking for fresh food, getting their heads blown off.

"Two o'clock," Ronon says and Lorne readjusts his sights. Ronon's a damned good spotter with his runner eyes. Lorne waits patiently for the zombie to come into his sights, dragging a useless leg behind it, when it comes into the crosshairs he doesn't hesitate to pull the trigger and watches John Sheppard's headless body slump to the floor.

It's not alright, but Ronon's hand, heavy on his neck, makes it bearable.

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Re: It's not Alright, SGA, Lorne, Ronon silentflux May 1 2009, 22:01:55 UTC
Oh, my. That's perfect and it hurts and damn... So awesome :)

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Re: It's not Alright, SGA, Lorne, Ronon kristories May 5 2009, 19:46:56 UTC
I'm glad you liked it :)

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Re: It's not Alright, SGA, Lorne, Ronon earthequality May 1 2009, 23:14:06 UTC
*glomps and uses your sleeve to wipe eyes* Why did you have to do it to John?!

I'm with silentflux, god, that hurt in the most beautiful of ways and maybe I shouldn't post the one I wrote for this prompt because If I cry this hard without a romantic pair, to imagine what I might inflict on people...

*sobs*

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Re: It's not Alright, SGA, Lorne, Ronon kristories May 5 2009, 19:48:34 UTC
*offers sleeve magnanimously* Dude! Post yours too! *pokes* I'm sorry I made you cry. :(

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Re: It's not Alright, SGA, Lorne, Ronon earthequality May 7 2009, 00:40:21 UTC
Thank you *sniffles*

LOL, I am, been working.

It's okay! It was a good story! :D

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