As promised, but with flaws, because goddammit LJ was being annoying. I tried to backspace a phrase and instead it operated the back button on the browser and I lost the draft. Which is REALLY annoying!
Luckily, I wasn't.... TOO far in. So, this is a commentary for
Suck it Up, Part 6 by
Strangeandcharm.
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Charmy is what my friends call her and we love reading her fics.
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Does anyone else have problems with the voices in their heads when they're reading stories? I'll just be reading it, and every once in a while I'll remind myself to phase Cas' dialogue into Misha Collin's voice.
The easiest voice to do that with is Bobby's. I think the hardest is Sam's. Dean and Castiel are pretty easy, but then that's probably because I've written so much of them in the last year or so!
I'm getting strangely garbled feelings about this passage.
Garbled in a good way or a bad way?!
The dialogue right here is melt-worthy amazing in a REALLY kinky way.
"Where would you like to bite me?"
"Is this a trick question?"
Hee! I'm glad you melted!
As Castiel presents himself like a well-made feast, detailing every last delicacy. This is cruelty to a hungry vampire.
Personally I just think it's cruelty to anybody who thinks that Castiel is a fine figure of a man. Or, uh, angel.
I don't know, I don't trust Castiel at this point. I ( ... )
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