Fic: Revenge

[silentdescant]

title: Revenge
pairing: Dom/Elijah, Dom/Billy
rating: NC-17
warnings: D/s, a bit of blood, lots of violence, borderline non-con
summary: Dom cheats on Elijah and Elijah finds out.
disclaimer: Totally untrue.

“You fucking whore,” Elijah hissed before the door had even closed. Dom froze, a gasp stuck in his throat. “On your fucking knees, Dominic. Now.”

Comments

[giddy_london]

oh, wow. you had me with the first sentence, hon, i must admit. elijah as the super dominant one is not something you often read, but i rather love it, and this was really well done. i especially like elijah calling dom 'dominic'. very nice! will you be posting to domlijah?

[silentdescant]

ummm, I hadn't thought about posting it there, but I'll see about doing that! and since you are one of the only Elijah people my f-list, I'm glad you liked it. :)

[rebel_blue]

...I love you.
I really do.
You've inspired me to write, but I have to get offline now and can't =/
But I will!!!

This: teh sex <333

[silentdescant]

OOOH YAY for writing!!! even if you can't do it now!

<333 back!

[babydazzle]

[silentdescant]

There could possibly be a part two sometime in the future.

Billy as the sweet, gentle one is kind of a role-reversal for me. Not to mention the Domlijah bit. LOL I might have a semi-formed plot in mind for a sequel.... maybe.

[babydazzle]

[silentdescant]

omg, I have sooo many things going in my head at once. I've got RunAway, a fic for jillo_loves_dom and one for bloodrayveness, this fic's possible sequel, random drabbly bits, and Escaping Blame just came and bit me again. I think eventually they're all going to merge into one monster fic when I lose the ability to keep my stories straight. LOL

Dom definitely needs 'sweet' after this angsty Elijah bit.

[jillo_loves_dom]

OMG I dont read slash like fics much but this IS wow!! Poor Dommie I felt terribly sorry for him! Huggles him, but it was good!

♥

~*Jillo*~

[silentdescant]

lol, well I'm glad you made an exception.

[jillo_loves_dom]

Yep you sure did!!! Talk laters!