Fic: Give Me A Reason

[silentdescant]

title: Give Me A Reason
pairing: Adam/Tommy, Tommy/others
rating: NC-17
words: 3700
warning: dub-con, public sex (in a club), humiliation, beating
summary: If Adam won't give Tommy what he wants, Tommy will just have to find it somewhere else.
disclaimer: this is very much untrue and no disrespect is intended. don't google yourself. please do not

Comments

[etharei]

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I... am pretty speechless, really. That was rough to read but cathartic at the end, which is kind of the point, so great job! I like the trash talking, which can be tricky to do well. I looove that you made it clear that this is what Tommy wanted, because it would be easy to chicken out and have him ~regret the experience; it makes for a stronger character for him to have known exactly what he was getting into (and want it again).

Great work, thank you for writing and sharing!

[silentdescant]

Thank you so much!! The idea that Tommy walked into that situation with eyes wide open was really appealing to me, so I'm really glad that worked for you. :)

[sulwen]

Love it. Love the concept, the execution, everything. Especially love how it was really about Adam the whole way through.

Awesome job, babe! <3

[silentdescant]

Thank you so much!! I just couldn't leave Adam out, even when he was left out. :)

[wynkat1313]

This is stunning. So brutal in execution as well as theme and perfectly done.

[silentdescant]

Thank you so much!! Totally fucked up is a specialty of mine. hee! :)

[thrace_adams]

Oh man, I hesitated before reading this because it is so not my thing, but Wow, this was so powerful, Tommy was so hurt and it was obvious that he wanted physical hurt to take the emotional hurt away and this was so well done. I'd love to see the talk the next morning, but what a great piece of writing.

[silentdescant]

Aww, thank you! I'm happy you gave it a chance, I know it's pretty brutal. I've actually been thinking about continuing it and going into their relationship, because this version of Tommy and Adam have stuck with me a bit, but who knows when that might happen, with all the other WIPs I've got going. :P

[thrace_adams]

Oh I vote for this one :) Good luck with all your WIPs :)

[andlightplay]

Oh Tommy ;____;.

But yay, it ended on a hopeful note, and protective!Adam is one of my favourites. Also, as was said above, the fact that you simutaneously had Tommy hurting but still wanting it was really well done.

♥

[silentdescant]

Oh Tommy indeed. Poor baby. I'm super happy you enjoyed it. :)

♥!