“Aww, you know I could rub it better for you, but…”
“…But what?” Frank blushed.
“Well. Bob might get mad for one.”
“Eh? Why would Bob get mad?”
“I found you in his bed this morning…” Gerard grinned at him.
Gerard had just successfully side tackled Frank, and was now being glared at from underneath long bangs that had fallen across dark eyes. Gerard swore he could hear Frank growling at him, and quickly scrambled off the floor and hid behind Bob, who was stood with comically wide eyes.
“Uh oh… Frank’s PMSing,” He said in Bob’s ear, “Give him chocolate! Give him chocolate!”
Heh... I see what you mean by comedy. Lets find something creative to tell you. Other than the fact that you absolutely have to continue this other wise I'm just going have to do me some virtual castration. I kid I kid. But seriously. I love it. The way that Frank is just pissed at Gerard for bein blind. Or at least that's my interpretation and the fact that Bob is always there for him when he needs it because he's the backbone of the band.
Alot of it is subtle commedy, not outright laughter. More inside your head giggling, if that makes sense?
I plan to continue it and complete it, but I don't want to post it in a comunity until it's pretty much done, because I don't spend alot of time writing.
I've been making time recently though. I find patence comes with practise when writing. I guess so, it takes something big for it to come out though. I have two basic one-shots layed out, I just need to fill them out a bit, because they have no imagination or images in them =/
“…But what?” Frank blushed.
“Well. Bob might get mad for one.”
“Eh? Why would Bob get mad?”
“I found you in his bed this morning…” Gerard grinned at him.
Gerard had just successfully side tackled Frank, and was now being glared at from underneath long bangs that had fallen across dark eyes. Gerard swore he could hear Frank growling at him, and quickly scrambled off the floor and hid behind Bob, who was stood with comically wide eyes.
“Uh oh… Frank’s PMSing,” He said in Bob’s ear, “Give him chocolate! Give him chocolate!”
Heh... I see what you mean by comedy. Lets find something creative to tell you. Other than the fact that you absolutely have to continue this other wise I'm just going have to do me some virtual castration. I kid I kid. But seriously. I love it. The way that Frank is just pissed at Gerard for bein blind. Or at least that's my interpretation and the fact that Bob is always there for him when he needs it because he's the backbone of the band.
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I plan to continue it and complete it, but I don't want to post it in a comunity until it's pretty much done, because I don't spend alot of time writing.
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Good I hope you do I love it. Lol at the way you write you should write more often =]
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Lol, already? wow.
If I had the time, patience and imagination to write more often, I would
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Yes already.
You haven't the time, that's cool. The patence maybe. The imagination definately. You know you do it just takes something specific to make it appear.
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=] =] =]
I've been making time recently though. I find patence comes with practise when writing. I guess so, it takes something big for it to come out though. I have two basic one-shots layed out, I just need to fill them out a bit, because they have no imagination or images in them =/
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I'm sure the two one-shots have some images in them somewhere it just will take sme unpicking of them to get them to pop.
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I'll be working on them soon =]
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