TF_Speedwriting: A crowded waiting room

[silberstreif]

Disclaimer: I don't own Transformers, Jazz or anything recognizable.

Continuity: Pre-G1
Characters: Jazz, Blaster, Reflector
Rating: PG
Prompt: Setting: A crowded waiting room (31st-March-2012: Prompt 1)
Warnings: none
Summary: A crowded waiting room as the Golden Age is waning.

Tha ks for the beta work by the wonderful Starfire201.

Comments

[pjlover666]

So powerful. So emotional. They are a different species, and yet they relate so much to our own...
Megatron, fighting for what is right. It's tragic that he looses himself in all that power. The change is not simply wanted but needed. Mechs die from starvation because of the corruptive system the Council has created. It takes two to start a war, Megatron is not the only one to blame for the future fall of Cybertron. I enjoyed so much reading Jazz's part of the conversation, so young...

The end was brilliant. Simple. Clean. Deadly. And directly to the point :)

*applause*

[silberstreif]

Thank you for your comment.

I could never see Megatron as a blind tyrann from the very beginning. There was once more to the Decepticons.

About Jazz, and to a lesser extent Reflector, I wanted to show some of our bots as innocent, young and full of hope. Not tarnished by the war yet, but still believing in a better future.

~silber

[jarakrisafis]

Oh, I do like this. No mech can say that Megatron didn't try for a peaceful compromise first. If anything the Council are to blame for their own demise.

And that ending made me shiver. Change had arrived indeed.

[silberstreif]

Thanks for your comment!

Megatron did try indeed, and he failed. But what the Council failed to see, was that its power was only as strong as the mechs that bowed to it - and Megatron wouldn't bow.

That the ending made you shiver, is a great compliment. :) All those hope that only led to an endless war. It's a tragedy.

~silber