Ah, a Jazz and Prowl story :) I love those! Your world building is rich as always, full of nice twists on fandom accepted 'facts' about many of the bots (even if canon is often not that clear), and I love both MC's characterization, which you have down pat!
Of course Jazz doesn't like cutting deals more than Prowl does, but he is resigned to it, and you give us a good look at Kaon back in the pre-war days, and why the Decepticon's could take roots there and attract new members easily.
I really like this! :)
Two little issues, though? I'm near sighted, so the font you use is really too small to read comfortably! And a little typo in this sentence:
"And how is that poseitive/positive for us?" asked Prowl confused.
...not that we fans don't play hard and fast with canon facts even IF they are very detailed, explained to death and seemingly set in stone, right? ;)
My eyesight would appreciate it! :) But LJ really was crashing big time some days ago. I'm impressed you even managed to post this - I wasn't even allowed to log in for long hours! Very annoying, when you wanted to get something done!
PS: I'm currently playing "Resident Evil 6" °_0" OMG! How did THAT happen?!
Hard and fast? We? Never.... ;) We just bend it bit, turn it around to look at it differently, expand a little, go bit forward and back (or sideways) in time... and dimension. You know. The usual.
I needed hours to get it up. -.- A friend of mine was waiting for me and I was like: I'm coming, I'm coming, just a few more minutes - werw!§piwpe LJ!
... Really? O.o Well, yes, HOW did that happen?! Didn't know you're a egoshooter fan. ^^
How do you figure that Resi is an ego-shooter? It isn't. It is a third person survival-horror-action game. Though the emphasis nowadays is heavily on action... You remember that I love "The Walking Dead", right? So I wanted to find a game that has similar topics/feels, which is why I bought "The Last of Us".
But then I watched "Resident Evil - Damnation" and fell in love with the MC, Leon Kennedy. I watched some 'Let's play's' over on YT and decided that after TLoU, Resi would be a piece of cake as long as I played it on "Easy". I suppose I have a thing for killing zombies now...
I figured it because of the action? ^^" Never played it though... I watched Walking Dead by now. It IS really good, and interesting, but creepy as hell. How did they make these costumes even?!
Of course Jazz doesn't like cutting deals more than Prowl does, but he is resigned to it, and you give us a good look at Kaon back in the pre-war days, and why the Decepticon's could take roots there and attract new members easily.
I really like this! :)
Two little issues, though? I'm near sighted, so the font you use is really too small to read comfortably!
And a little typo in this sentence:
"And how is that poseitive/positive for us?" asked Prowl confused.
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He doesn't like it one bit, but there are not many choices left in Kaon.
Mmh, sorry about the font. LJ was crashing on me when I uploaded it and I was glad it even went up at all. -.-" I try changing it later.
Thanks for the typo!
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My eyesight would appreciate it! :) But LJ really was crashing big time some days ago. I'm impressed you even managed to post this - I wasn't even allowed to log in for long hours! Very annoying, when you wanted to get something done!
PS: I'm currently playing "Resident Evil 6" °_0" OMG! How did THAT happen?!
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I needed hours to get it up. -.- A friend of mine was waiting for me and I was like: I'm coming, I'm coming, just a few more minutes - werw!§piwpe LJ!
... Really? O.o Well, yes, HOW did that happen?! Didn't know you're a egoshooter fan. ^^
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How do you figure that Resi is an ego-shooter? It isn't. It is a third person survival-horror-action game. Though the emphasis nowadays is heavily on action... You remember that I love "The Walking Dead", right? So I wanted to find a game that has similar topics/feels, which is why I bought "The Last of Us".
But then I watched "Resident Evil - Damnation" and fell in love with the MC, Leon Kennedy. I watched some 'Let's play's' over on YT and decided that after TLoU, Resi would be a piece of cake as long as I played it on "Easy". I suppose I have a thing for killing zombies now...
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I watched Walking Dead by now. It IS really good, and interesting, but creepy as hell. How did they make these costumes even?!
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All three seasons?
There are some making of's on the DVDs that show how they did it. Maybe you can find them YT too.
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