Comments | sidlj: 'Skyrockets in Flight', Jim/Blair, PG

sidlj

'Skyrockets in Flight', Jim/Blair, PG

Apr 30, 2007 03:47

Written for the glorious Day of Schmoop over at
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the sentinel, first time, fic, slash, jim/blair

Comments 25

sentinelfan999 April 30 2007, 08:44:29 UTC

Aw, it put a huge grin on my face! Love it! :)

sidlj April 30 2007, 20:38:14 UTC

I'm happy to hear that! Thanks. :-)

mab_browne April 30 2007, 09:10:37 UTC

Yup, I'd 'ooh and ahh' if I was kissing Blair. Nice schmoop. *g*

sidlj April 30 2007, 20:39:24 UTC

I might stick to moaning, but same idea. ;-)

Glad you enjoyed!

t_verano April 30 2007, 11:21:04 UTC

I love how you work the sights and sounds and Jim's changing perceptions together here, especially with the fireworks-in-Blair's-eyes images. Blue sparks, now, raining down, disappearing into the blueness that surrounded them -- beautiful. And the oohs and ahs -- what a perfect accompaniment to the kiss. Lovely idea, lovely fic.

sidlj April 30 2007, 20:41:10 UTC

When I saw the prompt I thought of Jim's senses immediately, and I could NOT resist! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks!

janedavitt April 30 2007, 11:49:35 UTC

This was Grade A schmoop; loved it! Beautiful merging of the imagery of the fireworks and Jim's senses.

sidlj April 30 2007, 20:43:06 UTC

Thanks so much! Schmoop rules! :-D

justhuman April 30 2007, 12:00:05 UTC

Sweet!

sidlj April 30 2007, 20:44:00 UTC

And tasty! Thank you. :-)