Archiving four orphaned SG-1 commentfic
When I was going through my commentfic tag last night, I discovered that a few days of posts at comment_fic from January 2009 have simply disappeared. I was able to find my word document, so I'm archiving those prompt responses here, lest they be lost to posterity. :-)
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Stargate SG-1 Jack/Daniel: white briefs
Daniel is straddling Jack’s bare lap, hands on Jack’s shoulders while Jack‘s hand is between their bodies, rubbing Daniel’s cock through his briefs while they both watch. Daniel is getting hard, but he can feel Jack’s cock stabbing up at him and knows that his lover is further along the path of arousal than he is. Struck by inspiration, Daniel shifts his weight and works his way to his feet.
Jack protests, more than half-heartedly, as Daniel strips off the briefs.
But he doesn’t protest at all when Daniel pulls him up and tells him to step into them.
And the speechless sounds he makes when Daniel kneels in front of him and begins to use his mouth and tongue, soaking the crotch of his own briefs with his saliva as he inhales both their scents, are all the encouragement Daniel could ask for, and he lets his eyes slide shut as his tongue searches out and savors Jack’s unique taste.
Stargate SG-1, Cameron/Daniel, complete misunderstanding
First time, with the attendant over-eagerness and nervous fumblings. They bumped noses, they bumped heads. They even managed to bump teeth. Cam had laughed, and Daniel had kissed him more carefully, but with just as much heat. Cam stripped Daniel’s clothing off in a flash, and Daniel uncovered Cam inch by slow inch, and they were both shaking with arousal by the time naked flesh touched naked flesh.
Cam climbed on top of Daniel and bared his teeth, and Daniel bared his teeth right back and rolled them both over, and Cam growled with lust and wrestled Daniel into submission, but Daniel didn’t submit and Cam wound up with his head and one shoulder dangling off the side of the bed and tense, excited laughter strangling in his throat.
Daniel lined up their cocks and wrapped his hand around them, with one finger in between and thrust a few times. Cam tensed his abs and stretched his arms and gripped Daniel’s ass, digging his fingers in, spreading and kneading the cheeks.
After a few strokes, Daniel hauled Cam back onto the bed and leaned over him to pick up the lube and condom from the nightstand. He laid the condom on Cam’s chest with a tight smile and glittering eyes, and flipped open the lid of the lube. He squeezed a good amount onto his fingertips.
“Hey, I can do that,” Cam protested.
Daniel gave him a sly, quizzical look. “I don’t mind. I’m actually looking forward to getting my fingers up your ass.”
“What? Whoa!” Cam brushed Daniel’s hand aside and sat up. “No.”
“No?”
“You are not fucking me.”
“What do you mean?” Daniel blinked. “You’re the one that laid out the fucking condom!”
“Yeah, for me! I thought I was doing you.”
“Uh, no; you’re not. I don’t know where you got that idea.”
“Well, fuck,” Cam said. “This sucks.”
And the hand job that they compromised on sucked, too, all things considered.
Stargate SG-1, Teal'c/Cameron, safewords are there for a reason
“I apologize,” Teal’c said soberly.
“Don’t. Don’t even. Please. You apologize, and I’m… gonna have to hit you.”
“I find that I have misled myself into believing I understood Tau’ri humor. That was before I met you, obviously.”
“Yeah. Well. If it’s laugh or cry, I’ll usually take laughing.”
There was a long pause. “But I have made you shed tears,” Teal’c said gently.
“That’s because I don’t really enjoy… safewords are there for a reason, man.”
“I understand. I will not forget.”
“Yeah, well. Don’t,” Cam muttered as he tenderly, remorsefully applied salve to the stripes on Teal’c’s back.
Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, jammies!fic
“I feel like a complete idiot. I haven’t worn PJs since I was eleven years old.”
“But aren’t they soft? Comfortable?”
“Daniel.”
“Humor me.”
“I humor you every day, but this flannel fetish is above and beyond… hey!”
“Does it feel good against your dick?” Daniel hummed into Jack’s ear.
“Geez. Your hand feels good against my dick, the stupid pajamas are just in the way. You get to be naked. Don’t make me sulk, here.”
Daniel undid two buttons on the jacket and slid his other hand inside to find a nipple. He laid his head on Jack’s shoulder and rubbed his cheek against the flannel. His hand left Jack’s dick and moved back to rub Jack’s ass through the pajama bottoms as he moved in tight and thrust his dick against Jack’s thigh, sighing.
“Wait,” Jack said quietly after a minute.
Daniel backed off a couple of inches and looked at him.
Jack’s hands fumbled at the remaining buttons on the jacket. The last one popped as he pulled the edges open wide. “Come in.”
Daniel moaned as he stepped in close and slid his arms around Jack’s bare waist.
Jack stretched the jacket fabric as far as he could around Daniel’s back, and held it in place with the pressure of his arms as he let go with his hands and wrapped Daniel in a flannel hug.
Daniel placed his open mouth against Jack’s neck, sucking hard and driving his hips against him, faster and faster.
“Not soft and comfortable,” Jack panted. “Hard. Hot.”
Daniel licked him.
“W-wet, oh, God, God, Daniel!”
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Stargate SG-1 Jack/Daniel: white briefs
Daniel is straddling Jack’s bare lap, hands on Jack’s shoulders while Jack‘s hand is between their bodies, rubbing Daniel’s cock through his briefs while they both watch. Daniel is getting hard, but he can feel Jack’s cock stabbing up at him and knows that his lover is further along the path of arousal than he is. Struck by inspiration, Daniel shifts his weight and works his way to his feet.
Jack protests, more than half-heartedly, as Daniel strips off the briefs.
But he doesn’t protest at all when Daniel pulls him up and tells him to step into them.
And the speechless sounds he makes when Daniel kneels in front of him and begins to use his mouth and tongue, soaking the crotch of his own briefs with his saliva as he inhales both their scents, are all the encouragement Daniel could ask for, and he lets his eyes slide shut as his tongue searches out and savors Jack’s unique taste.
Stargate SG-1, Cameron/Daniel, complete misunderstanding
First time, with the attendant over-eagerness and nervous fumblings. They bumped noses, they bumped heads. They even managed to bump teeth. Cam had laughed, and Daniel had kissed him more carefully, but with just as much heat. Cam stripped Daniel’s clothing off in a flash, and Daniel uncovered Cam inch by slow inch, and they were both shaking with arousal by the time naked flesh touched naked flesh.
Cam climbed on top of Daniel and bared his teeth, and Daniel bared his teeth right back and rolled them both over, and Cam growled with lust and wrestled Daniel into submission, but Daniel didn’t submit and Cam wound up with his head and one shoulder dangling off the side of the bed and tense, excited laughter strangling in his throat.
Daniel lined up their cocks and wrapped his hand around them, with one finger in between and thrust a few times. Cam tensed his abs and stretched his arms and gripped Daniel’s ass, digging his fingers in, spreading and kneading the cheeks.
After a few strokes, Daniel hauled Cam back onto the bed and leaned over him to pick up the lube and condom from the nightstand. He laid the condom on Cam’s chest with a tight smile and glittering eyes, and flipped open the lid of the lube. He squeezed a good amount onto his fingertips.
“Hey, I can do that,” Cam protested.
Daniel gave him a sly, quizzical look. “I don’t mind. I’m actually looking forward to getting my fingers up your ass.”
“What? Whoa!” Cam brushed Daniel’s hand aside and sat up. “No.”
“No?”
“You are not fucking me.”
“What do you mean?” Daniel blinked. “You’re the one that laid out the fucking condom!”
“Yeah, for me! I thought I was doing you.”
“Uh, no; you’re not. I don’t know where you got that idea.”
“Well, fuck,” Cam said. “This sucks.”
And the hand job that they compromised on sucked, too, all things considered.
Stargate SG-1, Teal'c/Cameron, safewords are there for a reason
“I apologize,” Teal’c said soberly.
“Don’t. Don’t even. Please. You apologize, and I’m… gonna have to hit you.”
“I find that I have misled myself into believing I understood Tau’ri humor. That was before I met you, obviously.”
“Yeah. Well. If it’s laugh or cry, I’ll usually take laughing.”
There was a long pause. “But I have made you shed tears,” Teal’c said gently.
“That’s because I don’t really enjoy… safewords are there for a reason, man.”
“I understand. I will not forget.”
“Yeah, well. Don’t,” Cam muttered as he tenderly, remorsefully applied salve to the stripes on Teal’c’s back.
Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, jammies!fic
“I feel like a complete idiot. I haven’t worn PJs since I was eleven years old.”
“But aren’t they soft? Comfortable?”
“Daniel.”
“Humor me.”
“I humor you every day, but this flannel fetish is above and beyond… hey!”
“Does it feel good against your dick?” Daniel hummed into Jack’s ear.
“Geez. Your hand feels good against my dick, the stupid pajamas are just in the way. You get to be naked. Don’t make me sulk, here.”
Daniel undid two buttons on the jacket and slid his other hand inside to find a nipple. He laid his head on Jack’s shoulder and rubbed his cheek against the flannel. His hand left Jack’s dick and moved back to rub Jack’s ass through the pajama bottoms as he moved in tight and thrust his dick against Jack’s thigh, sighing.
“Wait,” Jack said quietly after a minute.
Daniel backed off a couple of inches and looked at him.
Jack’s hands fumbled at the remaining buttons on the jacket. The last one popped as he pulled the edges open wide. “Come in.”
Daniel moaned as he stepped in close and slid his arms around Jack’s bare waist.
Jack stretched the jacket fabric as far as he could around Daniel’s back, and held it in place with the pressure of his arms as he let go with his hands and wrapped Daniel in a flannel hug.
Daniel placed his open mouth against Jack’s neck, sucking hard and driving his hips against him, faster and faster.
“Not soft and comfortable,” Jack panted. “Hard. Hot.”
Daniel licked him.
“W-wet, oh, God, God, Daniel!”
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