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sidlj

'Dream Deferred', Jack, Daniel (Dreamverse Chapter Four)

Mar 13, 2009 23:25

Chapter One: In These Dreams

Chapter Two: Scenes From a Mall

Chapter Three: Rapprochement

~2000 words, rated PG-13.

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dreamverse, fic, daniel/other, slash

Comments 81

chattycatsmeow March 14 2009, 04:23:05 UTC

GAH!!!!!!

::sigh::

Stupid Boyz. All of them. Okay, actually it's not so much stupid as complicated and realistic,dammit. But I am with Jack on this - "I want you to fix it.”

:D

::dives back into writing Jack/Sara fic::

sidlj March 14 2009, 15:51:22 UTC

Well, of course I will fix it - but they're not quite broken enough yet....

*rubs hands together*

tejas March 14 2009, 04:23:05 UTC

I *love* that there was no question and awkwardness with them sharing a bed. That was perfect.

Jack's somewhat chaotic thought processes as he planned his morning routine was priceless! :-)

And Jack's list of "damned distasteful things" just got a little longer.

*sniff*

When Bjorn lets slip, or flat out tells, that Jack is why he goes back to Daniel just how much shit is Jack going to get? :-):-)

sidlj March 14 2009, 15:53:46 UTC

Hmm, I will have to think about Daniel's likely reaction.

Possibly he'll send Jack a fruit basket? :-D

tejas March 14 2009, 18:55:32 UTC

I think Daniel might end up being a touch confused. :-)

sidlj March 14 2009, 19:03:11 UTC

Yes, I'm getting confused just thinking about what would go through Daniel's mind! "I thought Jack loved me; this proves he loves me; but if he loved me would he do this? And Bjorn wouldn't come back when I asked, but he'll come back for Jack, who he thinks wants me, and I thought so, too, but maybe not; and does this mean Bjorn's stopped worrying about Jack?"

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dragojustine March 14 2009, 06:14:30 UTC

They shared a bed and Jack did not wake up in a Certain Condition.

I think the Slash Police can arrest you for that, you know. *g*

I'm with Jack, except I don't want Bjorn to fix it- I want YOU to fix it. Fix them!

sidlj March 14 2009, 15:56:36 UTC

Ooh, do the Slash Police have handcuffs? *g*

I think they need a little more breaking before I can fix them. I am forcing myself to be evil that way because it makes for a better story.

tejas March 14 2009, 20:00:37 UTC

The Reality Police have had words with the Slash Police. Alcohol can be a bitch. :-)

sidlj March 14 2009, 20:05:32 UTC

LOL. So I've been given to understand. I have no personal knowledge, you understand.

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discodiva76 March 14 2009, 08:47:13 UTC

Oh my poor Jack......breaking heart and still he thinks only of Daniel's happiness......*goes to hit Daniel over head with honkin' big clue-bus-ey stick to make him realise who he should be with*....

But Bjorn is a sweetie too....surely there's a lovely young Scandinavian ex-pat walking around just waiting to fall into his Danish arms and bed....*snerk*

Loving this saga sooo much!....

Deeds xx

sidlj March 14 2009, 16:03:03 UTC

Jack is a true friend and a real hero. It's just a question of how long he'll have to wait for his reward. :-)

perfica March 14 2009, 09:45:29 UTC

OH NO!

I want to bash all their heads together.

sidlj March 14 2009, 16:04:52 UTC

LOL! That might knock some sense into 'em!