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[sidewalk_beauty]

I am sad. Of course, it is obvious as to why I am sad. He's leaving. He's leaving and I am staying to mourn and cry. I do not wish him to stay. But it is like salt on my wounds to see him leave.

That Man

That man of taut jaw
and noble mind and soul,
gave me excrutiating pleasures
and broke me into whole.

He tore apart my visions,
he sliced my heart in

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hey love.

[empty_ashes]

I admire the writing. you truly are talented mama. But be extreme and break away from format. anyone can write in stanzas. Simply write. With no style- just your own. Awesome baby- Simply, Awesome.

Life On Stage-

nice

[amissingpiece]

love the writing b. but i also agree with c-man!!(oh also and not everyone can write like you are SPEEEEEECIAL!!!)

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[sidewalk_beauty]

Thanks, Geralda. You always know how to make me smile.
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