Rain reveals the foundation, and this one's wearing thin, and shifting in the sand.
Ok, so i need some honest oppinions about this song,
i wrote it, can you please rate it on a scale from 1-10
suggestions are appreciated, thanx
I awake without you, in this slowly darkening room
Wondering, where you are and what happened,
Its 1 am as I wake, without you next to me
Do you remember that light in your eyes?
I used to tell you, it was enough to kill me,
So baby, wont you come back and light, this slowly darkening room
(slowly darkening room.)
Come back and drain me of this darkness,
Its in my dreams, and never leaves me,
You were my light, the fire in my eyes,
Now that your gone all I see is darkness, so wont you bring that light back to me?
i wrote it, can you please rate it on a scale from 1-10
suggestions are appreciated, thanx
I awake without you, in this slowly darkening room
Wondering, where you are and what happened,
Its 1 am as I wake, without you next to me
Do you remember that light in your eyes?
I used to tell you, it was enough to kill me,
So baby, wont you come back and light, this slowly darkening room
(slowly darkening room.)
Come back and drain me of this darkness,
Its in my dreams, and never leaves me,
You were my light, the fire in my eyes,
Now that your gone all I see is darkness, so wont you bring that light back to me?