Christmas Without You (1/4)

Dec 20, 2008 00:01

Title: Christmas Without You ( Read more... )

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sueworld2003 December 20 2008, 10:40:53 UTC
OMG that was wonderful! and yes, it felt very much like the format of the show. I can't wait for the next part! *g*

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shylahmask December 23 2008, 03:34:40 UTC
Glad you liked it! It was one of those stories that practically unraveled in my mind with little effort.

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kudagirl December 20 2008, 15:39:40 UTC
While the focus in this is on Spike, none of the characters are overlooked. They are all having moments of angst and saddness. They seem to be frozen in place instead of dealing with the loss of Buffy. Anya and Tara's partners are shutting them out with their grief. Dawn has lost so much and feels very alone. Poor Spike blames himself which would be difficult enough, but Buffybot is a walking reminder of Buffy. The Bot torments Spike with his loss.

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shylahmask December 23 2008, 03:36:42 UTC
Yep! Things are distributed a lot more evenly between characters than my other stories.

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shylahmask December 23 2008, 03:37:43 UTC
Hee! What's a Buffy ep without the opening credits?

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louise39 December 21 2008, 21:56:46 UTC
Great start and a cliffhanger, too!!

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shylahmask December 24 2008, 02:35:01 UTC
Glaaad you liked! :)

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hello_spikey December 22 2008, 16:28:55 UTC
aaaaw poor sad everyone!!

I like that you put the credits in there. :D

I totally watched 'em through. Ah, nostalgic moment!

Good teaser, and every character has something to do. And what is this baddie? Dum dum duuuumMM!

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shylahmask December 24 2008, 02:36:48 UTC
Hee! Yeah everytime I read through the rough draft I'd have to stop and watch the credits because of the nostalgia. Everything seems so quiet when you suddenly keep reading the fic.

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