[oneshot] oniichan, i'm sorry... part 1/2

[shuyen]

Title: oniichan, I’m sorry

Author: shuyen

Pairing: Ryoda, slight Akame

Genre: Angst, death

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: the characters are owned by their parents…my depressed mode a while ago owns the plot (lol)

Summary: what happened when hatred rules your life (gosh..i’m sorry, now I know it is really hard to make a summary..gomen)

A/N: un-betaed…(gomen

Comments

[kamenajin]

waaaaah
dear ryo-chan's mean here
waaaaaaah
tsk tsk bad, bad
update soon okay
i want to know what happen next^^

ps cherries
heheheh
why do i have a feeling about that cherries
LOL

*hugs*

[shuyen]

lol..^_^

actually before confused ako between cherry and strawberry..lol

eh ikaw kasi eh ngpost ng pictures ng ryoda na may cherries...nainspired tuloy ako iinclude siya..

oi bukas ko na basahin u update..(ayaw ko madepressed lalo..lol)

yeah meanie si ryo dito pero kawawa rin siya in the end..lol

chuu*

tingnan ko lng if may update pa ako..wahahah

chuu*

[keena_keena]

wooooooooot!! Bad Ryo! but i think he already feels guilty! GOOD!! poor ueda, being bullied like that! XDD Jinjin and Kazu are just tooooo cute, ne?

[shuyen]

yeah...i can sense it too...

hugs for tatchan..

akame is really cute

chuu*

thanks for reading and commenting

[snow_meow]

I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

Ryo is really heartless.

I get the feeling Ueda's mum senses something is wrong in her heart which is why she told him she would never leave his side.

I wonder what happen to Ueda to make him look the way he is.

[shuyen]

i think they call it as mother's instinct ne?.. hehehe

you'll know when i post the final part already.. hehehe

chuu*

thanks for reading and commenting

^_^

[ramadiii]

I can't help but to "Awwww!" at this xD

I really can't wait to read more <3

*chuu

[shuyen]

ahihihi

thanks for reading and commenting sweety

wait for the next chapter, ok? hehehhe

chuu*

[ramadiii]

Of course I will darling <3<3<3<3

You always wait for mine, ne? xD

[museelo]

Ryo is really crual..
Axtually I have a question : why do you choose the one-eyed disease ? Y ou could say that Tatsuya would be in a chair... It just chocked me XD

Anyway, thank you for sharing and.. please update soon ! è_é/

[shuyen]

it's my younger sister who gave me the idea...

i liked it because it's unusual and so i developed the idea into like this..hihihi

(and also i have a classmate way back in highschool... he has no left eye anymore because of an infection..T_T..but he's opposite to the character of tatchan..because he's accepted while tatchan is bullied...)

i hope the final part will help us explain why he lost his left eye...

thanks for reading and commenting

chuu*